AWESOME! I love this story!

Loved to see Bumblebee face Shockwave! Will there be any more meetings before the story ends?

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Have only read the note at the top so far, but I knew you and this fic weren't dead. From what I've read already, you have a habit of disappearing for a long time, but coming back with awesome chapters, so I can't really complain. I will have to reread the whole thing, but I can't wait to get to this chapter!

Oh my god, and here I was thinking I was lucky enough to get the chance to read this from beggining to end in a row. Oh well, let's wait then.

Dude, seriously I hope you don't let this die, it's just awesome. I can imagine everything so easily, and even when the chapters are long (just the way I like them ;P) it's so easy to follow the story and don't get tired, but rather wonder to yourself, is it really over already?, another chap?

I can appreciate the effort you did to mantain tha style and consistency of the story even when your own style changed as you matured (since it has been years for you writing this). I loved the way you managed to do that.

I think it's also awesome that you have not only the storytelling creativity, but also the animation skills. Don't give up on either if that's really what you wanna live for, even if it ends up like a sidejob.

Anyway, I sincerely hope that your life is better now, and I want you to know that here's another soul waiting to see the end of this masterpiece.

Cya!

I agree. Rodimus just pulled the ultimate dumbass move. ️

Godammit bumblebee️

ohmygod is there going to be more? I love this fic sooo much! keep up the amazing work, great job, and I hope you update soon!

FFFFffffrag, it's been a long while since I re-read this story, and this latest chapter - HOOO BOI there's gonna be some serious slag to pay in the next update, ain't there? I look forward to it, whenever that day comes.
Thanks for the story, it's been an amazing ride start to current finish :)

Wow, these are probably the most realistic rape scenes (with regards to Bumblebee's feelings at least) that I've read. I shudder to think how you know how it feels, and I congratulate you for writing so well with such a scenario that is awful to think about. I hope this story updates soon.

He went through so much and has gone so far. My gosh this story is... this story has kept me on he edge of my sit ever since I started reading it. This story is very well written and thought out, the plot is full of... how'd I say this? Gosh, I don't know how to describe how good this story is and how each character stayed with it's respectful personality. You are amazingly good at this! Bumblebee does really need Prowl, and Prowl does need Bumblebee. They've learned a lot about each other in the past few events. And those small, fluff scenes, I loved them all. All those scenes with Bee and Prowl.
And Shockwave, I'm mad at you now. You're at the back of my mind as far as I'm concerned, same with all you decepti-creeps. Hmph...

EDIT: I didn't realize I had wrote the review while as guest until I logged back in and checked. -_-

He went through so much and has gone so far. My gosh this story is... this story has kept me on he edge of my sit ever since I started reading it. This story is very well written and thought out, the plot is full of... how'd I say this? Gosh, I don't know how to describe how good this story is and how each character stayed with it's respectful personality. You are amazingly good at this! Bumblebee does really need Prowl, and Prowl does need Bumblebee. They've learned a lot about each other in the past few events. And those small, fluff scenes, I loved them all. All those scenes with Bee and Prowl.
And Shockwave, I'm mad at you now. You're at the back of my mind as far as I'm concerned, same with all you decepti-creeps. Hmph...

Why does Bumblebee have to be like that? He deserves to get so much more. HE DESERVES TO BE A PRIME! THE KING OF THE WORLD! Oh yeah!

You can do it Bumblebee! I know you can! Mommy is here for you sweetbee

Well... At least someone actually knows what Bee had gone through.

I feel so sad right now:,( i was crying at every part of Bumblebees...

Hey when are you gonna release the 3rd and finale part I just started reading this fanfic a couple days ago and I like it but you never updated your profile for almost 2 years now and I don’t know if your busy or not or your using this profile at all.