Reviews for Stumbling in Fog
Guest chapter 6 . 11/24/2018
This fic sent me a feeling when I watched the trailer of "The Last Of Us". I love it when calm and creepy goes well with each other. My imagination was so wild it felt like watching a horror movie. I'm so relieved everything was alright and then Leo's restraints just HAD to do that. This is gonna hunt me for awhile.
TMNT Loving Leo the Second chapter 3 . 10/20/2017
Definitely positive, Leo... XD
pikachucutie17 chapter 6 . 5/30/2016
WOW was this a thrill ride of a fic. I was on the edge and nearly screamed out loud at a couple of the scares you threw at me. It's hard to get a good jump-scare across in words, but you did it beautifully. I loved the change in dynamic that Mikey had to be the protective one. It brings out a lot in the characters and your use of these two brothers in particular brought out the best in the story. I could feel the utter silence and creepiness of the atmosphere and how exhausted these two were from simply trying to survive. And I was beyond relieved when they finally made it out of that nightmare. Also, a really good last line. Strong from beginning to end, so keep it up!
Momo chapter 6 . 8/21/2015
Beautiful atmospheric story. Caoptured the nature of Silent Hill wonderfully.
From the very first sentence to the very last.
I liked it very much
Michael J Angelo chapter 6 . 3/6/2015
I've read a few silent Hill crossovers here and there, but this one is by far the best one. I literally got chills during some parts, and I love the concept the town's monsters change to accommodate its victims.

Absolutely loved it, we'll done!
VenustheMarvelTurtle chapter 4 . 10/20/2014
Holy crap. *clicks to next page*
VenustheMarvelTurtle chapter 2 . 10/20/2014
This detail is amazing! It's so horrible and realistic. Chopped cabbage? Whoa.
CDR. Grae chapter 6 . 3/23/2014
Oh my god, this really kept me in the edge of my seat! VERY creepy! I haven't really watched Silent Hill so I have no idea who the guy with the pyramid head was. I was just reading this for it's horror and suspense and now I'm REALLY glad that I did! Poor Leo and Mikey! I don't know who's the one in the worst situation there (probably Leo) but I couldn't take it when they finally met Raph and Don and tey got the nerve to joke around. (but I guess it was understandable considering they didn't experience the hell the two went through. But I'm kinda confused at the last part where Leo's handcuffs just fell to the ground and ceumbled to dust. Is that your way of saying that they're finally free from that cursed town or something? And also, if you can, please explain how the hell they got there an also my question above. Thank you and I am totally praising you right now for this work of art! :D
I wish to Fly chapter 6 . 4/7/2013
Whoah, what's with the crumbling handcuffs?!
Rivenchu chapter 6 . 12/30/2012
Interesting... never would have thought of this crossover. Nice split between characters, and SH creepy. ;-; The ending was the right note for it too! Thanks for writing.
Bella Stella chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
…My sister's playing Mario in the background. IT REALLY KILLS THE MOOD OF THIS AWESOME STORY. :(
That aside, it's really good, and actually quite frightening! Thumbs up!
Ruija chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
I've enjoyed the genre horror for some time now, but reading this fic made me realise that in this format I enjoy it even more! I love horror games but playing them makes me too scared and anxious but reading the same thing feels much more same but at the same time it's so thrilling! (Yes, I am familiar with the Silent hill series, and I have a high respect for them)
My favorite part was the first chapter where Leo is searching in the fog and the first turtle-monster appears. The athmosphere you created was amazing. The part when he was in the store and he had to hide from his swords was also my favorite. I always prefer struggle for survival over epic battles. So much cooler.
I'm also glad that Leonardo and Mikey found each other and managed to save themsleves in the end. In the beginning of the story I was so afraid Mikey had died. I don't like character deaths and bad endings, they only make me depressed and I've had enough of that for a lifetime. Mikey being the leader and taking care of Leo is also a feature I always love in TMNT stories. The symbolism with the handcuffs was a nice touch.
TheAngelofFate chapter 6 . 7/27/2011
This. Was. So. Badass! I enjoyed every moment of this story! I love the bit with Leo's swords tuning against him! Very creepy, and I LOVED it! Even though I have never seen Silent Hills I can easily picture what it looks like... Again I really enjoyed reading this story! D
Aroa S. Quadrale chapter 6 . 7/27/2011
Awesome! Was expecting it to be longer but it works, Leo leaving his swords behind was a nice touch though they most likely would have crumbled like the cuffs when they got a distance away and i would have been weary of them all the time if they didn't, thinking they might attack me in the night or something. I would have liked to see them talk about it to their brothers a little more but the story is awesome!
Mondhexe chapter 6 . 7/27/2011
Another great story.
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