A ver interesting cocept and an underrated masterpiece.

Wonder how Mary Jane will explain all this to Jessica? Can't wait to find out!

Glad to see you're back. I had to go and re-read the whole story it had been so long. There's a subtle difference in the writing from where you had left off to this new chapter. Still I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Intense! Hope you update soon.
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Looks like MJ has a new friend! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Mary Jane is really getting a bad break! Still hope to see more soon.

Sorry for the late review, but I really like this chapter. I can't wait to see more.

Wow, didn't see that coming. Still love this story and I'm glad you got back round to writing it, I find your writing to be very compelling and extremely interesting. I find it interesting her 'other' called her by her first name. I imagine that was intentional. Keep up the good work!

Really cool chapter! Hope you can update soon.

THingd are building up to a confrontation. I love it! Please update soon.

Loving this story sooooo much. I love to read you're writing, it's really enjoyable and I hope it returns soon because I adore this story.

I like the sort of Jason Bourne meets Ultimate Spiderman thing you have going on in this story. It's very intriguing. Hopefully school doesn't kill your interesting in writing this, although I know too well that it's a possibility.

This is a great story, and I sincerely hope you never give up on it. The idea of Mary Jane as Toxin is just too cool.

This is a great story. Hope you update soon. I can't wait to see all the 'assests' in action.

Wow, for a long time I've wondered what exactly the 'Others' were. (I guess I'm not as sharp as some may like) Either way i love the writing and can't wait for this to be continued!