Aaaawww. I really liked this story! Only thing is I don't think it would have been that easy for Cloud to move Zack around with his wings out, but it's neglectable.

Poor Zack! Glad Cloud proved to him that wings don't matter to him

Really good. Please write more.

amazing! I love the thought of seme!cloud/uke!zack. loved it to bits 3

Oh! Me like angel wings!Zack and loved seme!Cloud! Nicely written. Kind of sweet too even amidst all that hotness.

~FM :)

Thank you, I adore it.

Someone get a mop, I've melted into a puddle of fan-girlness on the floor! Holy crap my heart is racing with giddiness! Super super SUPER cute! I couldn't stop grinning the entire read! Gah that was smokin' hot...And finally, some well deserved seme for Cloud! Great job!

its bout time somebody made a fic with cloud a seme. i havent seen ANY fics...well, cept for one...that actually do that. so i'll say this: THANK U FOR CONTRIBUTING TO THE XTREMELY RARE Cloud-seme/Zack-uke PAIRING. i swear its like cloud topping zack is a myth

nice job on this oneshot too! written very well

It's so sweet. I love Zack wings. I could have cried when Zack cry. Very good. -

Thank you for writing this! I love wing!fics and there just aren't enough of them on :D.

However I noticed you spelled "emerge" as "immerge", please fix that.

Otherwise an excellent story, Zack and Cloud are so cute together!

Hey Sunsoara

This was a great fic, very well written and a great smut scene, right now I'm reading this and it is early in the morning here in little old England, reading this fic was a great way to start the day.

I'm quite a fluffly person not all angsty, cause well angst is boring and what's the point in being depressive? I mean I know some fluff is like syrup but most fluff has realism like yours, your the way Zack feared Cloud's reaction, that was real and fluffy oh and wait, no angst! Yeah sorry way to go me rant about angst in a review, I'm soo clever ~sweatdrop~

Anyway this was a well thought out idea, very enjoyable, great smut scene, and I love the ZackxCloud pairing, I'm not the hugest fan you will find of FF7 but I do like it and I love CC on the PSP meep you could so see in the ending Zack and Cloud go together. Anyway great pairing pairing, great fic.

Yay first review! This fic is so cool, I love the idea of Zack with wings! I almost cried when he was crying! But damn hot lemon to, Uke Zack and Seme Cloud are the best! Please update!