a shame harry hardly actually interacts with characters from Hellsing. what a pointless story.

This is good so far, too bad you did not complete it.

I look forward to when the next chapter comes up. Prayers for your mother and whole family.

People like Harry in this fic always make me mad.

FREAKING UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE I LOVE THIS BOOK IT'S AMAZING DON'T LEAVE ME HERE I NEED MORE THAN THIS!

Maxwell needs to flippin' chill. I get where he's coming from but to react with violence will lead to more violence. The pope is right,he needs to centre himself or he will only lead himself and those around him to demise. *tuts* Just look what happened in cannon cos he got so overzealous, even Anderson knowing he'd lost him before that still had tried to get him to see reason. Just chill out Maxwell.

Okay I'm going to assume the blood being smelled by the Goblins is what Harry put on his scar. But you are jumping around so much I'm uncertain.

Find peace with yourself. Not piece like puzzles. I'm enjoying this story, but may I offer a bit of advice run the chapters through on Chrome cause it is free. The site will help catch minor mistakes like that or missing words.

so... the goblins think he killed somebody, but he just got a nosebleed? xD

Well that was interesting.

Love your story so far! Looking forward to your next update!

a little rushed and the style doesn't help it one bit.

though i think that is the structure to blame here, the plot on the other hand is good, if a little jumpy-dulcet if you get what i mean.

overall a great job, few spelling errors but some bad grammar, nothing that can't be fixed and forgiven :)

hope to see a new chapter soon.

Its a magazine, not a clip. Please get the terminology correct.

Not to mention the fact that Rowling has stated that Harry is basically Jesus. And all religions are accepted there.

My local Bishop told me the church would have no issue with the wizards of Harry Potter universe since they were born with the power. They made no deals with fell creatures, nor Deals with any devils so do not fall under the no sorcery clause. He actually wrote a paper that's accepted. Someone like Voldemort though... They would probably declare a crusade against him.