| Reviews for Last Rites |
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   Ticcing Bat chapter 19 . 7/19 update please |
| Ticcing Bat chapter 19 . 7/19 please upstairs |
| jack the shmee chapter 19 . 10/21/2019 Still such an amazing fic! Thank you so much for writing and I hope you're well! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2019 "Where were her parents to reign in all the overwrought tendencies?" It's REIN IN. (Think about using a horse's reins to control it.) |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/3/2019 You put a LIEN on a house, not a LEAN. |
| foreverthedreamer chapter 19 . 4/20/2018 What are the chances of this story continuing? |
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/19/2017 Let me read this story to you Edward, like I do EVERY FUCKING NIGHT...could bella be more boring if she fucking tried? JESUS. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/19/2017 chapter 14 felt really out of place. Why in the actual fuck would Edward be seeing and hearing things that aren't really there? As if death is a person that can talk to you. It was just weird and felt like a huge waste of time. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/18/2017 There are a bunch of mistakes in chapter 10, grammar stuff mostly. Why does Bella come off a little slow? Like retarded? Its a bit strange to read Emmett try to get Edward to visit a prostitute...well, whore I guess. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/18/2017 I really don't get the whole food thing bella was doing in the theater...she knows that food tastes and smells nasty to him so why would she do that? It REALLY doesn't make sense. Pretty much all of chapter 8 didn't make much sense...it felt like you needed to hit some word count so you just started rambling or something. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/18/2017 Edward refers to himself as the devil...LOL actually, your just a stupid 17 year old child. Its so funny reading about him thinking of himself this way. As if hes so bad ...like almost EVERY OTHER vampire isn't worse then him. Its like listening to a girl talk about how pretty she is, but we know shes ugly. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/18/2017 For a girl that's all...death follows me everywhere she sure hasn't seen much of it. ONE DEATH? that's it? And shes making all that noise? And she acted so ready for it then whines like a little bitch when its time. I could really do with less bullshit inner monologues and more actual story. If the characters are shit why would we want so much of them? |
| fatpotatoe chapter 5 . 3/14/2017 Nice foreboding with Renee putting Bella's hand in Edward's. I enjoy your writing very much. I hope you continue. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/29/2016 Dang. Wish the adventure would continue. You're one of the best writers here. |
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 8 . 6/21/2016 Neat story! Thanks for writing! |
