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My goodness its so subtle but still amazing

"You're just wasting your energy, and you're breaking my heart." I loved that line. Simply expressed but it somehow captured the sorrow of her supposed one-sided love. This is a beautiful, short piece. I love it.

I wish Sasuke actually said something, though I guess it's more than enough for the reader that this was written in his POV. Still, it must be hard for Sakura. Talking to a brick wall like that. While we got the luxury of his thoughts, she is probably confused like hell with him.

But anyway, that's just me rambling. I've read this more than five times, and my sentiments haven't changed. Love this work!

that was simple one shot ...and here I am all overwhelmed with sasusaku feels..you are an amazing writer

Sequel please!

This is super cute and liek YASSSS

That was REALLY GOOD!

its short. but i still liked it :)

AHHH sasusaku feels are so coming back right now.
That was quite lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
The last line is my favorite.
I just love it when a oneshot ends with a sucker punch to the reader's face.

Lovely story! :D

Ooooh I loved it! I can tell you're a good writer - I loved the beginning where Sakura thinks she looks like a warrior but Sasuke begs to differ. Very interesting :)

wow loved it and i don't usually review for just anyone

I loved it! The ending was beautiful, EVERYTHING was beautiful. Great job :)

I really liked this story, despite its length. Sasuke is so tsundere hahaha, but I find it adorable. Plus I love the song you based it on. :)

"You're just wasting your energy," her eyes softened, "and you're breaking my heart." God, is that beautiful or what! Anyways, I loved it!