Nice.

SOOO Cute! I loved it! Great job!

Oh I love this little story! Maybe John will be in his dress blues for the wedding! Love seeing him in them, even if its only once on the show!

LOL, that was sweet fluff! But I thought the ceremony was very nice and meaningful.

This was so adorably sweet! It was also funny.

Loved these quotes:

John had known for a long time that Elizabeth had an evil streak she hid behind her professionalism, but not until he’d met Laura did he discover that it was a) inherited and b) really very evil. THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD I WAS LOOKING AROUND TO MAKE SURE NOONE WAS LOOKING AT ME STRANGELY. LUCKILY NOBODY WAS, BUT IT WAS A CLOSE THING.

“Well, with you wearing that, no one’s gonna be looking at the bride.” LOVED THIS ONE BECAUSE I WAS /NOT/ EXPECTING IT AND IT CAME OUT OF THE BLUE. HA! HE'S REALLY JUST THAT SWEET AND AWESOME (YOU SHOWED THAT WELL).

Laura raised an eyebrow – so where Elizabeth learned that trick from – and went back to her pinning. “All right, then, tell me about this perfect wedding.” WITH TOO MUCH MORE, LAURA IS ABOUT TO BECOME A FAVORITE MINOR CHARACTER FROM FANFICTION. SHE'S GREAT!

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The description of the marriage was just beautiful, and I loved the way John /finally/ realized he could be with Elizabeth. Lovely sparkyness!

Thanks for letting us read and enjoy.

Leucothea29

that story is perfect i'd say. great work! br

*squeal!* Oh I loved this! I can't stop smiling, really. Yay! I absolutely *love* Elizabeth's mom and the Weir women's evil streak. And the bit about the Athosian wedding ceremony was very perfect. Love how they just fell into sync with each other without even realizing it.

This made me very very happy. Bravo. :D

Beautiful to bad this didn't happen in canon. Very sweet. Hope to read more fics from you.