Reviews for The Foolproof Move
please chapter 5 . 4/25
I SWEAR TO GOD WHAT IS TAKING SO LONG IT HAS ALREADY BEEN 8 FUCKING YEARS I WILL FIND YOU AND KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T UPDATE
Chicken Nugget chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
Please don't let this beautiful story die. As soon as I realized that this isn't finished, I cried. Please don't let this story die it is probably one of the greatest fanfics I've ever read. Please it's almost 2017 don't abandon your work of art
Guest chapter 5 . 5/1/2016
Dude its 2016! could you pleeease update soon?
(btw you're story is super good!)
VioletMika chapter 5 . 11/7/2015
please, pleASE, PLEASE UPDATE omIGOD THE YAOI IS BEAUTIFUL AND HAVING TO WAIT HURTS MY HEART
Lughnasadh chapter 5 . 8/10/2015
So I heard that death threats will motivate you to update... It's been years and you may well be figuratively dead and all, but if you're still alive, you won't be for long if you don't update. *winks*

I'M KIDDING. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS.
Ed 18 chapter 2 . 8/5/2015
This fanfiction is well written. I tend to read SmashFics with FE characters...Heheh...Marth has Ceada/Sheeda, right? He's going to break her heart if he falls for Ike...
Popo chapter 5 . 4/23/2015
Ugggghhhh how are you able to write these scenes so hot? Gosh, I love your writing! I've read so many of your stories haha! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
UPDATE! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THREE YEARS
IkexMarth chapter 5 . 12/20/2014
love it really good grammar and i didnt notise any flaws and yes it was nise and steamy very nice for a cookie
lolita-glaceon chapter 5 . 12/14/2014
Oh my gosh! This is getting interesting! All you're other chapters we're pretty hilarious.
Please continue this story. /
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
thought alms hair was green?
Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2014
Really sexy
Jayson chapter 5 . 3/8/2014
So amazing! So few people on this damn site even care about grammar, punctuation, or spelling. I absolutely loved this (and though I may be wrong) I hope it continues!

From a faithful fan,
Kuroki
Natia0 chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
I'm waiting for Marth to get revenge xD But daaaamn the story is so cool I really like the way you write! I'm in love with this fanfic please tell me you will continue it
JumyoIchi chapter 5 . 12/1/2013
I WANT, NO, NEEEEDDD MOARRRR!
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