Man I really wished this story could continue but hey it was fun reading while it lasted

Just stumbled across this story and its pure magic. I read the whole thing in one go and now it's like 3.20 am here. Its brilliant. I love Jenny. And I love how everyone kind just rolls thier eyes I the start and than kind of warms up to her. I love her and Ben together. They are fricking adorable! Also like her relationship with Dom and Cole. Baird and her is also so believable. Though I kind of suspect that despite being such an ass still to her, kinda has to admit to himself that hes impressed she manged to not be dead yet. Just a tinnie bit. I kinda want to see her safe his life or something. His reaction would be hilarious, lol also the amount of shit hed get from everyone. Hehe. But my absolute favorite relationship with her is between her and Marcus. I love how he's always looking out for her and Ben like a big papa bear. the way he's frustrated, impressed, worried, mystified and reflected is simply amazingly well written and even I could read about that all day. If given the chance I recon they'd develope an interesting sibling or maybe even "father/daughter" relationship.
I know ts unlikely but if you ever feel inspired again it be amazing to find out what happens in your version of events.

I love this story it's a great layout of the game and I love the parts about Jenny it reminds me of myself I love you to finish it

I hope to read more of this even though it has been SIX years.

I really like this story

M A N, this is a great fic, I hope it gets updated again.

there was a dragon age reference in this and i love you for that.

I'm curious to see how it ends. Will Jen and Ben live happily ever after?

Just reread hoping for update.

Ok, I hope I don't come across too blunt but this... is just plain ridiculous. Now, I don't have anything about shy or meek female characters (although they aren't my cup of tea), but the characterization of Jennifer doesn't makes a modicum of sense. I'm assuming here that she is a military-medic (meaning that she got the MOS of "combat medic" to put it on layman terms); now, a combat medic has received basic combat training, at least 10 weeks of it, plus her specialized trained, meaning that she also has been going into drills and/or simulations.
I can understand her being scared, or having moments of doubt, even being shy, BUT SHE IS STILL A TRAINED SOLDIER, SHE ISN'T GOING TO HAVE THE REACTIONS OF A CIVILIAN, SHE HAS A DIFFERENT PSYCHOLOGY.

Sorry for the caps, but as someone who has a big interest in military life, this fanfiction just made rolls my eyes to the back of my head. Soldiers have varied personalities, but they are still trained fight her, and someone with Jennifer's personality wouldn't have made it past basic training. Her character could work, just no as a soldier.

Y 4 U NOT CONUINUE! Plz write more!
*Big dewy eyes*

Hey, I know you have probably stopped this series but can you please continue it, it's the only carmine fanfiction that I enjoy.

My happiness after I realized Ben wouldn't. Be killed off.

I love the story, although i did forgot about it for the past how ever many months. And you should make the chapters smaller so you can get them out faster and get past some writers block

Curious I really enjoyed reading this question though what happened to Jennifer's friend Sinclair you said she was attached to Sigma but you were non descriptive about her fait