*gasps* Sanji!? How could you?!

OH SHIT

Your grammar improves greatly thoughout each chapter, and I like the fact that Sanji's in denial, and isn't gay but made an Luffy's an exception. I'm a lesbian, but I've been attracted to certain boys (usually slim boys with wide eyes- ya' know, feminine- like Luffy).

Also, Luffy mentioned Vivi- is he bisexual/pansexual?

wow this is really good

Good story!

However... every heard of bisexuality? It is in fact possible to be attracted to both genders...

Hy there... I see tat u really like LuZo... Any way ur story was nice to read but it would have been better if u had wrote one more chapter. U see. This was story of SanLu so u could have shown more of thm thn LuZo. N the ending. I will be frank, i did not like it... Their time together was very less.. Forgive me if i sound rude. But total ur story was nice.

Was that it? I guess this is a good end.

Well, it was pleasant to follow your story !
I'd like to read your "love scene" if you'll write it !

I really enjoyed reading this fic. But the last chapter was a bit too rushed I suppose. Still it was enjoyable. Thanks for uploading :)

Mmmmm... (this is my thinking face just so you know) It lacks... something... but it's good still. Odd to read Luffy as a seme though, but its understandable that he wouldn't bottom for anyone but the one he's paired with in a fic and tops the random people before the relationship ... Meh, don't know what else to say really...

Love the last chapters !
Poor Luffy ! But I'm kinda feeling bad for Sanji too, that's new for him and it came really fast.
Whatever, keep going as you want ! Your story thrills me :D

2 things. Zoro homophobic ha, yeah right. Nope not possible. And they are in the Sunny. If they have Franky then this is after water 7 and they are in the Thousand Sunny. Merry isn't at all strong enough for their following adventures. Again, Zoro can't lie to Luffy. They have a subconscious link that doesn't allow. This story has a couple of missing links in the zoro aspect and the ship aspect. Also you are underestimating Sanjis code concerning women, if you followed the recent manga chapters you'd see that even if he were tortured or on the verge of dying by women he would still trust them, for him to forget to respect them because of words, nope impossible, likely only when he dies and is reincarnated as a shell.

Sanji is a ****...Luffy I feel bad for him, anyway love the chapter!

ahahaha, poor Sanji

Ah I have to say I love this story and your writing style is nice. One problem would just be Zoro's attitude and how homophobic/extreme traditionalist he is here.

I just didn't get that vibe either especially after the scene where he and Luffy were pretty much snuggling. They were already so intimate and as a fellow ZoLu fan I just don't see the ideas of "a man belonging with a woman, it was simple Biology"

"He seen Luffy and Zoro lying down next to each other and inhaled another breath of the toxin. He narrowed his eyes as he seen Luffy move closer to Zoro and Zoro smirk. Wasn't Luffy in love with him? He tightened his hold on the railing as he jealously watched the two below.
..Luffy smiled and Zoro wrapped an arm around him; the railing cracked. Sanji could hear the railing creak in protest as Zoro pulled the captain intimately close. Zoro turned his face towards Luffy's and smiled deviously. Sanji wanted to kick them both.."

I know it hasn't been updated for a while, but in my opinion and from what i've seen of the series...Zoro just doesn't strike me as someone *that* conservative..I mean Sanji being the womanizer would probably have a freak out but Zoro..I agree that he would support him no matter what..but for him to have to lie when Luffy asks if "its okay he is gay" just doesn't sound like him. I only really see it being Zoro starts thinking this way because he's deeply closeted. And a suggestion would be making this into a love triangle, or showing Zoro's feelings.

Again great story but I just can't picture Zoro ever being that homophobic. I do hope you update as it is a very good read.