AWESOME! Aura's look is totally cool! Though, who was the asshole that did that to her? And you DO realize that, being married to Laguna, Raine's last name would be Loire and NOT Leonhart, right?

{cracks up}LAGUNA~! XDD I love him, mainly for him being such a goof when compared to Squall, but who doesn't love the goofs as much as the badasses? XD And him being headmaster does make sense. - I am now wondering if you are going to stick to the game and have Raine be dead and Squall living on his own or if you are gonna fsck with the game and have Raine be around and be a teacher or something. XDD

Ooh! Things are heating up! ~.~ I like where this is going. Now... I actually made a list of the kids to keep track of who's in what clique, but I wanna send it to you to see if I have it right, so here it is!:

SHADOWS

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Squall Leonhart

Genesis Rhapsodos

Nero?

Aura Lockhart

Irvine Kinneas

REBELS

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Tidus

Seifer Almasy

Gippal

Paine

Yuffie Kisaragi

Rosso

Brother

POPULARS

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Rinoa Heartilly

Shuyin

Zell Dincht

Quistis Trepe

Selphie Tilmitt

Yuna Lockhart

Lenne Lockhart

Baralai

TURKS

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Vincent Valentine

NOT SURE YETs

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RIKKU

Yeah, I put the last name of "Lockhart" down next to Aura, Lenne and Yuna so that I didn't forget that you made them Tifa's sisters. ' Well, that's it for this review. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Ooh! This sounds interesting! I've managed to figure out which group all but 2 of the people mentioned in this chapter are in. The two I'm not too sure about are Baralai and Genesis. I wanna say that Baralai's with the Populars and Genesis is with the Shadows, but I'm not too sure. I just KNOW Gen ain't with the Turks cause then you'd just be effing up the FF7 series there. XD

Good job. Most of them seem in character, which is always hard to do, maybe except rinoa, but whatever. keep up the good work.

Interesting...

Aww... Cloud Tifa

So is Cloud at the school. He's my favourite. Can't wait to see where you go with this.