Reviews for ZION
Owlwho2 chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Sry, can't help you with the gun, I don't know much either. But maybe kanda should use a type of sword that can turn into a gun? I dont know, just a though. I think Allen should be a sniper. Anyway... Keep writing XD IT'S REALLY INTERESTING! Good luck finding guns for moyashi and bakanda!
Laught chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I loved it. I'll be waiting for the next chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Hmmm... Write some more... I like the concept, but I'm not sure if i like the plot yet...
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
what about the guns in devil may cry?

like the ebony and ivory model and the blue rose model?
Blue.Eyes.White.Dragon.3000 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Interesting fanfic. Canaan is an awsome anime, I just watched the first episode and I like it. You were right about Alphard being a female look alike of Kanda. Please update soon!
100thAngel chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I like it, it's interesting! _
Joyce chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
AK-47!

Joking T_T I don't know much bout guns either. I watched the first episode and I'm hooked :D just need to find time to watch the other episodes. Finally something new on ffnet :)
Error101 chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
lOLZ, nice story..can't wait for next chap!

Lolz, Canaan is good...but i'm confused about it...lol
Rei chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
It's so true! When I first saw the poster of Canaan, I thought Alphard was Kanda, (well Kanda's look alike) then it took me a while to realize the things in front of her were boobs xD. I was like "No," I wanted it to be a boy D:.
HateYou chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
So far this story is cool, and I like it. :) Hope the next chapter will be up soon!
Befallings chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Alva: Yo! I am here. I don't remember if I have ever reviewed one of your works, but I know for sure that I enjoy reading them. : ) I'm too lazy to log into my own (reviewing) account so I'm here. Anyway, I think it's too early for me to judge this story, and I'll go look up Canaan before going any further.

Befallings: You have a mistake.

F- C- G—F- A- G-E—D- E- F- A- G- F- E- D- E- F- E- D- C- D…

It should be F- A- G-F- A- G-... Not F- C- G- at the starting. That is all.

Alva: Nitpicker. But yeah, that's just about it. Thought you'd like to know. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. So I'll be seeing you again soon. Cheers!

-Befallings and Alva Hesperus