This is like a bad South American soap opera, sorry. Over dramatic and hammy.

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I have always thought that Tanya had something to do with Bella loosing her baby. I wouldn’t put it past that viper to poison Bella deliberately.

"I heard him utter a few expletive's" The expletives don't own anything, so no apostrophe is needed. The plural form is EXPLETIVES. (Plural nouns never have apostrophes!)

"So...um...when did you start having problems with your mare's?" Good grief. The mares don't own anything! "Mares" is the plural form you should've used. Plural nouns never have apostrophes. "Mare's" is the possessive form. ("The other mares have eaten that mare's oats.")

Are you sure you had a beta?

"Good. I meant for it too." It's "Good. I meant for it TO." (TOO means only "very" or "also.") It's implied that she means "Good. I meant for it to hurt."

"...hopping the steam would work the kinks out of my muscles." LOL He's not hopping - he's HOPING!

"I don't think their coming until later next week." It's THEY'RE (the contraction for THEY ARE).
You don't go through airport security after you land. Duh.
Uh, you don't fly over the Pacific Ocean to get to Paris.
"I had ate more dirt today..." It's EATEN. (Sigh.)

"It's not like we haven't went out at all..." It's HAVEN'T GONE. Verb conjugation matters: go, went, [has, have, had] gone.

Good chapter, except for two things. First is, that no matter how much I hope, all of you insist on everyone bending backwards to satisfy Alice. Especially Bella. Typical.
Second, that was a sorry excuse for an apology by Edward. I hope at least Bella had an enough of a spine to not accept it. Because if she did, that would be beyond pathetic.
Here's hoping for the best...

An engaging story, so far... But I think Edward just got off easy. And you're turning this to a typical fic, where everyone else (especially Alice), gets their own way, but Bella. And you really need help with punctuation.

Doing things right means asking Bella herself. She's not her fathers's property.

why is this a E and B story? Edward broke up with her...they haven't really seen each other in NINE fucking years...AND hes a whore now...so why?
no one wants whoreward

Does she ever stop crying.

well at least it wasn't predictable...bella married a guy that had cheated on her? right after they got engaged no less? ha! well that's her fucking fault then...she never should have married that piece of shit. That whole "he wants me" shit is crap...she could have found someone else that wanted her...someone that wouldn't fucking cheat too...BELLAS FAULT