This was just... awesome. Most people don't realise that Kisame needs some loving too.

Splee! _ Adorable~

Wow, I am yet again thoroughly impressed with your writing! I love Kisame stories, he really doesn't get enough love.

I really liked this story. _ Not to far fetched, cute and makes me warm inside to see Kisa loved. XD I was just writing my Kisame one shot to and his personality didn't come as easily for me as it seems it did for you. Good job. ;P

Since for some silly reason I can't reply to; 'lolwhut?'s' profile, I'll just review and make this 'quick' for her/him.

Ahem.

No, it wasn't a joke and no, I don't need writing classes, I'm British and I've had my fair share of English/writing classes thank you, you have no right to criticse my grammar, as far as I'm concerned I've seen a LOT worse, but I don't send flames about them, because it is degrading, not everyone can live up to YOUR expectations so get off my back about it.

So what if Kisame is OOC?

Who SAID you 'had' to read my story?

You didn't have too, nor did you have to leave a message that was basically a waste of my time.

I admit, everyone has opinions and I'm not saying you have to LIKE my story, cause I'm not, but seriously, get a life, no one made you read my story, you CHOSE too, stop complaining.

And I know it's not the worst story you've EVER read.

Btw, I can have whatever plot I like, frankly, my PRACTISING to write/type stories shouldn't 'bother' you.

So, I'm not sorry, I WON'T apologise, I don't care if you've read better or worse, quite frankly your bitching is rather pathetic and stupid.

If this is how you review other stories, then dude, you need to get yourself a hobby, not everyone's going to jump at your word and do what you say is 'right'.

Anyway, I'm done now.

Was this a joke? Cause if it was, then it was pretty funny. If not then well, uh, I hate to be the one to tell you this, but you should really consider taking some writing classes. Your grammer is way off and your story just makes no sense. Kisame is completely OOC and it's silly plot (if you can even call it that). "A Lullaby" was a good effort but you could use a lot of improvement.

What a beautiful one-shot. It is spectacular. I was left speachless. Bravo. I never really liked Kisame but this changes that. To be honest, they don't give him enough scenes in Naruto.

Yo. Actually, I have to say, Kisame wasn't really OOC and this was very original. Great job, it's hard to create and describe a personality of such a side character. Good luck in the future!

oh...my...god, best oneshot ever I loved it you have serious potential keep writting and I hope to see more of your fan fics and stories. I hope that you are never plagued from the dreaded writters block, and I hope to see more stories.

sincerely,

Akina Mameido