Loved it, but in no. 9, bill is the one mrs Weasley will argue about with the hair

I liked ur earlier chapters, but I hated this one. I don't believe in flames, but I absolutely do not like this one

I was so happy when you mentioned Victoire named her daughter Kristina (it's my name!)because very few fanfics use the name, and even if they do they NEVER spell it with a K. This made my day lol

Sorry but I hate how you put Rose and Her family in a negative light
I also hate that you put Slitheryn in a negative light. Why? Everything you just wrote goes against the characters personalies in the book.
It feels like racism in the Harry Potter world.
I'm sorry if it comes out as aggressive, I was just upset with this chapter.
On the positive side your writing skills are exceptional and quite gripping despite my disappointment of the context.
I do like many of your other stories.
In the end you are allowed to write whatever you want and I applaud you for taking " the road not taken" for this chapter. Carry on writing.

I really enjoyed this, you did an amazing job diving into the character deeper than I ever have before. I'm actually writing an Oliver-Katie fic right now! Amazing work!

You can't be smart if you are hateful. Wich your Rose is. Full of hate.

Amazing but there are lots of grammatical errors!

I love this story, the happy parts make me laugh and the sad parts make me bawl my eyes out, and I think that is always something I want in a story.

I really love this, especially the whole Rose and Andromeda linking thing. I think Rose has to be my fave third generation character when she's with Scorpios and i just...I fell for her, having to abandon her family.

Really, really good. Keep it up!

I am in love with your version of Andromeda. Seriously. This was wonderful and heartbreakingly dark and incredible to read.

I thought this one was completely spot on!

I like... 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 8, and 10. Oh, uh, sorry 9 and 7. That was meant to be my favorites label of a few, but they all crept in! Except 9. And 7. Sorry 7 and 9.

So... I liked 10 and 4, because it highlights Andromeda's (unrequited to her) love for her family in a beautiful, beautiful way. 8 and 5 shone because they were windows to two characters that I didn't really understand quite as well (yet), and they both shed light on them while still being framed in developing the character of Andromeda. 6 and 2 shaped Andromeda's ideology and self-perception while still being engaging. I liked the story that 3 told. And finally, 1 was just funny.

I think I covered all the special ones. Let me try to narrow it down to the mega one, though... 4 and 10. Yeah, I lied. That wasn't one. But it's narrower than eight, so... THERE.

I'm glad that I liked 10 so much, because sometimes 10 is merely a conclusion and doesn't really ADD to it. This time, 10 did.

Thank you!

Poor Andromeda. :(

Very good, though.

I really liked this. This is kinda what I envision Andromeda to be like. The Blacks seemed like a pretty close family and well after they turned their backs on her, it does seem like she'd be quite the conflicted person. And I agree, she isnt like Sirius.

But I have to disagree with Andromeda and Rose being alike. Im sorry, but to me, regarding this story, Rose has seemed quite selfish. I really couldnt imagine Hermione turning her back on her only daughter, maybe Ron, but not Hermione. Rose sounds like she could care less about her family whereas Andromeda still feels for the people who casted her out.

Lol whatever tho, its your story, and a great one at it :) Can't wait for the next one! I really love reading this :)

Lexi,

What wonderful depths you have found in Andromeda. I find it ironic that someone who hated her own name, gave her daughter a name she was destined to hate. But I do like what you have found within her.

FoM

PS Just for the record, though it might disturb Ron and Hermione. I don't believe they would turn against Rose and Scorpius. Isn't that what the damn War was all about?

PSS Did you see DH2 yet?

love it! honestly i love how everything goes back to scorpius and rose