And for the first time, L failed, because Leon would never give up, not when he's so close. :) This was a great introspective fic, I enjoyed reading D's thoughts in this. Good luck on your writing!

Wow

Words fail me, anything I say now is mindless gushing after seeing how well you've used them to write this. The imagery, the descriptions, I am left speechless.

...So...so...I love it...just love it. This is great!

I loved this. You're a very good writer! and I like how you portray Count D. Good job in this story (;

Please...Im not one for begging but I BEG you please make this into a story. PLEASE.

A bit Angsty...

LOVE IT! XD

Beautiful. I'm still feeling the shivers, and I've feeling them since the very first paragraph. It's hauntingly gorgeous, and the last line took my breath away.

oh, i LOVE this! All the stuff about madness ... shiver ... wow, it's so L and Light and D!(and L and D are both single letters! D could've come from Wammy's, haha!)

This was very good. I loved the characterization, and all D's little observations about L and Light.

Glued to the screen the entire time, this story was awesome, and I like how D kept thinking! Really fit!

O...M...G!

Squee!

Love this love this love this, the characterization of the

characters are just spot on. And the wonderful twisted irony...yum...lovely. Thanks for such a great piece of work :D

Lovely. Beautifully structure, beautiful writing and what beautiful irony.