damn, this is so good! such a pity its not finishedreally great story ! thank you!

its a crying shame this wasnt finished

bad bad willow treating tara like that

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Oh, damn it! Never finished it! :(

Tara's got the right intentions, but obviously lacks...finess.

And that Crispin...fucking bastard.

I like how Tara isn't perfect and she also has irrational angers working out for her (being more bothered by the fact Willow's hanging with a men rather than another woman)

Crispin is bad news. I knew it the moment Tara said he "gives creepy vibes" Always trust Tara on those!

I love how you managed to make Willow...well, Willowy despite all the anger and hostility. That feeling of loneliness and rejected would definitly work chaos on Willow.

Everyone's in character! Buffy keeps being so sweet despite getting kicked (The Mayor was right, she's kind of like a dog...in the good way)

Dawn gets really angry but eventually forgives and holds no grudges.

Love it!

Awesome! I love a well handled evil-Willow.

hey, please UPDATE! :)

love yiu

Dude, wassup?

It's CJ - your previous co-author. Haven't heard from you in forever since we both ditched AOHell. Is there a particular reason the last couple chapters we wrote last summer haven't been posted yet? Email me sometime and lets get this thing done. It's only been 6 and a half years... :)

CJ

VP of the B/S SS Forever

Ooh, I love the Spuffy moments, and yeah, "The Girl In Question" blew chunks.

I like the twist! Quite a ironic situation you have created here, putting them all back together in the same situation. Brava! I am very impressed with your craftiness. Oh, and just think of all the overtones you can play with now, and how easy it will be to mislead the reader into thinking whatever you want- very well done.

Great character development in this chapter, although to be nitpicky, I find Dawn to be a bit of a sketch instead of a fleshed-out character. She was great earlier in the story, but is losing her realness.

Good building of suspense...