I love this story so much it was amazing great work :D

I love this story so much you write shawn’s character so on point and how do you come up with such well thought out mysteries it’s amazing

I read this whole story under two hours. This is probably the best piece of writing I have ever read. This was so amazingly written, I can't praise it enough!

This was a great story! I enjoyed reading it. Excellent clue arrangement.

I absolutely loved the story. It was funny, had a good crime, and even hinted Shassie now and then we got what we wanted in the end. I love i love i love it. STORY WAS AMAZING!

Interesting! XD Tou stayed very true to their characters through out the whole story (except maybe the end chapter, but I am new to this pairing). Good job on also making one hell of a mystery.

this ending is fricking hilarious! XD

OHHh I loved it! When I started read this, I first thought WOW you described Gus amazingly right! How he always talk to Shawn like he is a kid :D And I really enjoyed the banter between Lassiter and Shawn, and can to be honest to say that I wasn't that shocked to see how it ended between them hehhe :) It had a really sexually tension between them throughout the story.

I love this. You wrote the characters really well and wrote a complex and entertaining mystery. Amazing. And the last chapter was fantastic! I also really liked the flashback.

Great story, really enjoyed it. Everyone was in character and I was pleased to find a similar sense of humor as there is in the show. Overall good job, keep writing.

Why do I ship this. What have you done to me.

There are several things I admire about this. First and foremost, the characterization. I don't think I have the vocabulary, patience, or knowledge of random 80's movies to even get close with grappling with these characters, yet you did it with flying colors. Serious jealousy, man. Great job. Secondly, the plot. I don't even know what to say. You had it all clearly planned out from the beginning, it wasn't too hard to follow, and it was just intricate enough to have me enthusiastically abandoning my chemistry homework (thanks for that, by the way) and proceeding to read this until the dark hours of the night. Holy crows, the plot. Thirdly, you actually elaborated on Shawn's intelligence. Surprisingly enough, (at least to me) not many fics actually DO. Give the man some credit, he's an absolute genius. And you did- especially at the end there- and, I have to admit, I'm still squealing.

Long story short, I think I love you.

Brilliant, just brilliant, now I ship Shassie. I'm going down a dark road. A dark road, I tell you.

Lexi

Alright, i absolutely loved this story! It's so incredible, no joke! c:
And the Shassie-ness most likely helped make it beautiful. :')

Just finished chapter 5. That argument between Shawn and Henry was really well done. After that last thing that Shawn said I actually made the "oooo" noise and the face you make when you've just seen someone get punched in the face. This whole thing is really well written and could totally be an episode.

OMGGG. LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! You're writing is absolutely amazing! Everyone stays in character and I can actually imagine them saying the lines. it was great! good job(:

I cant say how much i love your story and how you write... and i will go not to the pairing- this two are just to perfect for each other- Shawn has respect for Lassy- and he can hold Shawn on the ground and push him in the right irection when he trys to do something stupid
And the end chapter was great- the little lover spat that they have now and then and then it comes to this point where they can only end together or run away from each other(as if they coud ever stay away to long from each other_)- that they came together ... love it.
please many many more of this pairing!