Of course someone would have Jake die, TEAM JACOB :(

Nice

the story was really good and i cant belive Jacob died, i really liked it, and i wish that i could write like that lol. i think it was good the way that you refered back to what happened with renesme and everyone else in Breaking Dawn.

thumbs up from me.

is that really the end?

it can't be,

you hafta keep writing,

ilovethisstory,

and yes,

i meant to type that without spaces,

Jake died? Aw...that's so sad.

Great story though. :)