this was incredibley hot! perfect characterization, and an awesome awesome plotline! i loved the angsty/violence between them, i was getting frusterated from only finding light fluffy fics where they fall in love and get married or something retarded. thanks for renewing my faith in this fandom. .

Aw, poor Feenie. But I do like this dominant side of Edgeworth. It's different from how most fics portray him. I like it!

You may want to fix the characters listed in the story info. It says Phoenix and G. Edgeworth (Edgey's father). You might want to fix that.