| Reviews for On to Lookout Mountain |
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swac twilight14 chapter 2 . 1/20/2012 this is soooo cute |
AlliPaige chapter 2 . 3/26/2010 haha cute! and i love how you remembered to mention the "unforgettable evening" and "chewy worms" so it made sense later. great! loved it! |
lifeisveryshortsoami chapter 2 . 12/19/2009 When Sonny "Awed" inside, I did outside. That was so cute! You did a WONDERFUL job! Chad was sweet for once in his life, and him and Sonny were just so...in character! But there is one thing you didn't do: Explain how Sonny got home after Chad left with the rest of the Randoms! Ha ha, I am just kidding. But you should've added that on, too! Awesome story (told you I'd read more eventually!) |
lifeisveryshortsoami chapter 1 . 12/19/2009 Ok, it just took me 3 tries to even log in. First, I had the wrong password, then the wrong letters in the image. My email has been acting weird lately, I can't get any emails from this website so if you answer this review I won't get it... But I kept trying because I knew I HAD TO review this! Best line: "You hang up first." "Ok." Paraphrasing, so sorry if that's not exact. But you're lucky no one was around to hear me laugh at that...I probably would've been in trouble for laughing so loud! You explained EVERYTHING! How Tawni ended up in the back of the car, how Nico and Grady got confused about which car to scare...AWESOME! I have to go read the next chapter now. Talk to you in a few! |
nerdify chapter 2 . 12/9/2009 That was really good. I can actually see that happening in the show. Awesome job! :) |
Maheemaisawesome chapter 2 . 11/4/2009 That was so sweet! That's exactly how I would imagine they would speak-first arguing, then making up, and I love how it's not all fantasy stuff-they're not in love yet, but they will be :) Overall, it's a sweet,simple, romantic story, and really well written :D GOOD JOB RAHIE! |
a angel from heaven.not chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 the part from the car reminded me of forever the sickest kids song "shes a lady" when the song says "she's a backseat driver" oh and when sonny drags chad into one of her plans it reminds me of whoa oh!when they sing"why do i put myself in these job. |
TaliaSteele chapter 1 . 8/12/2009 lol he said "you hang up first" the she said "ok" lol |
yetti chapter 2 . 7/26/2009 Aw, so cute. I always wondered, especially because he said in the flash-forward "I said this would be a night to remeber" or something and he never said that in the flashback part. Well done. |
cheerleader19500 chapter 2 . 7/23/2009 great job! |
cware chapter 2 . 7/19/2009 Whoa. That totally could've happened. AWESOME! |
cware chapter 1 . 7/19/2009 “You hang up first,” Chad suavely flirted. Sonny shrugged. “Ok.” The line went dead. AH! OMG i LOLd for real. That was amazingly priceless and so in character. I love this so far. |
ungmin chapter 2 . 7/19/2009 Aw! I can't believe I haven't read this before! So sorry! School's been busy, but it's totally worth reading this! I loved the parts when Chad was staring at his own reflection and driving lazily and Sonny yelling at him. And also when he changed the stations. xD And their talk was so sweet! I really like this story! |
Wish2MakeWishes chapter 2 . 7/17/2009 aw this was so awsome! it was so good that even once i realized i was getting a head ache i finished reading before i got asprin lol i love this |
SterlingIsMyKnight chapter 2 . 7/16/2009 Sterling is way hotter! |