really cute. Kind of dramatic, but sweet. Heart warming moment. Loved it!

great job keep it up

This was good, I really liked it. I do love oneshots and this is perfect the way it is but I can't help but wish you would carry it further. The way you captured Lily's emotions is beautiful, it was very real. Good job.

lovely little piece 3

i like it very much. its so happy-ending-ish, it makes me feel... sappy /lol/

keep writing!

ISNAS