If Megatron and Optimus are true brothers in The Bayverse, would this not be rape and, worse yet, incest?

awesome story )

I had this image when Ironhide came in when Optimus woke up of Starscream secretly being awake and gagging in the background.

I never thought I would read something like this. Transformers "breeding" never crossed my mind, and I have yet to delve into the world of transformer fanfiction even though I love the series. I may have to start reading a few.

Wow awesome story

That was very good! I was hoping that you could have made more of an optimus prime mpreg with a cute tiny sparkling next time.

Ah, mpreg… forever making me squirm and squee.

I'm bamboozled. How on Earth did that manage to incredibly sexy? Why on Earth was the entire second half of this chapter the hottest thing I've read in, like, a week?

I'll never be able to watch the Transformers movies in the same way again...

Keep up the good work!

Angel

I have read all of your story's at least 10 times, and each time I finish them I come to the same realization...you are the grandest Transformers fan-fiction writer EVER!
Thank you sooo much for sharing the wonderful tale with us!

For what was such a good concept for a story I found myself disappointed. Perhaps it's just not to my taste, I don't know, but I found your characters somewhat flat and uninteresting. There were a few minor errors but it was nothing a good beta can't fix. But since this was written a while ago I'm going to assume your writing skill has improved and solider on and read the sequel you wrote.

I hope my criticism doesn't offend you and you continue to write more.

Nice story, thanks for sharing

I really like this story. Good work. :-)

WHOAH! I love It :) Amazing work and Chapter 8 was amazing :) I'm so reading the sequel :D

My ovaries! Now I have the urge to hug a baby.

wow! this was so well written, I enjoyed it immensely! c: