This is very well written! You write margret and andrew so accurately, terrific work!

They're so cute together! Just love them.

OMG Where is the rest?! Ahhhhhh write forever!

It's really good to have you write

This one-shot is awesome! It makes me wish there was more of the movie, especially that last line.

Love these lines:

Either a horse or Kevin. She really hopes it's a horse.

"I can hear you thinking too much," Andrew sings, tapping the side of her forehead.

"You're not the boss right now," he says, a little more awake than before.

She expects him to be offended, but Andrew shocks her when his smirk only widens. He teases her lips again. "You'll just have to find out," he says, mischief coloring his tone.

A shiver of anticipation runs down her spine and Margaret thinks that Andrew will be the death of the old her. She hides her smile as he tucks her head underneath his chin.

She can't wait.

i like it

YEH Margaret and Andrew love. So happy

Ah fluff. The world should have more, as should the movie.

The characters are in character, the writing was flawless, the plot bunny was fantastically fluffy and it all wrapped up in a little package of shameless cuteness (with a little bow on top)

I, of course, ship this a thousand times, as they are one of my favourite movie couples, and I thought this was really good.

Keep up the good work *mental highfive!*

Ah fluff. The world should have more, as should the movie.

The characters are in character, the writing was flawless, the plot bunny was fantastically fluffy and it all wrapped up in a little package of shameless cuteness (with a little bow on top)

I, of course, ship this a thousand times, as they are one of my favourite movie couples, and I thought this was really good.

Keep up the good work *mental highfive!*

Ah fluff. The world should have more, as should the movie.

The characters are in character, the writing was flawless, the plot bunny was fantastically fluffy and it all wrapped up in a little package of shameless cuteness (with a little bow on top)

I, of course, ship this a thousand times, as they are one of my favourite movie couples, and I thought this was really good.

Keep up the good work *mental highfive!*

You totally captured the personality of these characters. I could actually imagine the actors doing these things. Also, shameless fluff FTW.

This is cute, and your right, there wasn't enough fluff in the movie.

Aww, how sweet and adorable! I just saw the movie again on TV a few days ago, and I fell in love with this fandom once more after reading this lovely fic. You surely captured Andrew and Margaret's characters wonderfully, I adore the way you wrote their interactions here in this story. Well done! :]

This was really, really good! And now I want to se the movie again!

this was so cute, really in character as well 3