wait, where's the rest?

Just like the title of this chapter, I'm impatient! I hope you update soon; I've grown quite attached to this story. More importantly, you're doing a pretty good job of writing it. I hope you keep going with this. Good job so far.

I like it

I really hope there is more. Please make the new chapters come quick.

Very interesting. Looking forward to more

Yeah! Now THAT'S the kind of chapter I was talking about! (: Awesome vocab and other than a few missing commas, great grammar(: It's really an improvement.

Update soon! (I can't wait!)

I really like this so far. So the boy with the blue and silvery aura was Sokka right? I guess we'll find out soon. Great job! Update soon! :]

I can really picture Ozai sending Azula on a suicide mission. Great Job, update soon please.

Nice chapter, although there were a few grammatical errors. Try using more commas, it really defines the style of writing your going for, and makes longer setences a lot easier to read(:

update soon!

(: I liked the ending(: And oh boy do I love family bonding like Sokka and Katara's(:

I am still really likin' this story!

And at the beginning sharing a small sentence to Toph/Zuko likers such as myself (even if it's plutonic) sold me(: But, just a suggestion, you should spell check if you don't already. If you do, just do it twice or something. There weren't many marks, but enough to intrest me in telling you. And just for future refrence, it's routine, not rutean(:

And if you want more reviews, you should toggle the 'ananoymous review' on.

Hey, I really like this so far. I honestly laughed out loud about the whole Suki-Haru thing (but not in a mocking way, of course). I really like this and I could definately picture it happening. I can't wait to read more(: