I'm not really liking Kreen he seems... greedy, hunger for being Alpha and being to ambitious.

Hmmmm interesting!

wow this is amazing!

omg LOVE THE BOOK! please keep writing! i wanna no what happens!

This is really good so far. I'm looking forward to more.

Please update soon! You haven't put a new chapter up in FOREVER!

Its good! but wolves don't hiss and spit like cats!

sweetlio... i think you should read the book. a dragga is the male leader and a drappa is a female. animals are lera. for the author: why is a wolf named morTra ( try switching the t with a g and it will sound familiar). i really like your quotes i going to try that in return from beyond... about fighting technique sight wolves usually dart in to an opponent for a brief heavy fight , no quarter or taunts involved. when someones goes down it's bloody and gory. don't use under belly kicks.

Cool names, but the titles were kinda confusing, although by the end of the chap i figured out a dragga was like a mate

WOW this was good, but the fighting style is very obviusly warriors styled. and once again the names... another wolf named Fren and a wolf named Kreen... Kreen sorta sounds like Kraar and Fren is the name of a mythical seer.

Yay! finally another Warriors/sight fan has posted a story! I was the only one so far! I think it's going pretty ggod though the next chap should start getting to the problem and solution. and the names are rather strange... a wolf named Mortra! and a wolf named Mell... they look awfully alot like Morgra and Fell! is this foreshadowing or just sheer coincidence, considering you only changed one letter!

well i think that i like to see more of your story, and i really cant say i hate something that gives me the first impression to read on. (i LOVE cute wolf pups!)

keep up the good work, very few people write fanfics on this section...