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MMTyler chapter 35 . 6/20 Amazing story. |
Debbie Hicks chapter 35 . 5/1 36. Chapter 36. : Blood bonded Bpov blood bonded as all of them then As all of it then bonded to him toe as all of it Fled with them as a result Blood Bound to them to Emily and Kim then the more blood to best fiends to as all of the more all of them then vey far way too much mostly more as all of with Alien Venom as all of them drinkig more suddenly cloaks found me drinking thyen more blod as all good you die newborns for crimes we found her/army theser then chained us/they the scramig Used pain onto us/they were Head-Cord severed from here executd then scramig who turn yiu freaks tell our masters we Forbidden to mate then Snapped with they then bring them then where you think are leaving we own you the let the trial then good guard then Nothingness then Piercing freely pop tore from here then wih the torturd cries wih myse/they surrendered Broken freely then suddenly no longer alive the Screaming r then Wiped out Cursed to be a Nomadic but Wanderers outcastd but Ripped then were are no longer alive fled but as all of them as all of them Head-Cord then lost from bring them all of them now to home you are Punished as Exiles as our rule no parent train but tach them then Too late then to them the to he with bitten best fiends to Bree and Diego to others then Slipped but lost control then to Aliens/Vulcans as all of it then Pissed trashed in anger six who turned you freak then screaming the finally wit you and rest bitten Blacking out he head-cod severe brought here with him/they with the three with they see revealing to us/to the humans what End them with the very as all of hem Phased are Lycans then skinned alive then too late More of Volturi Guards then violently good they are departed end them there it was too late the cause of the Blood bond made us/they a lot more Starfleet Marine stroinger and more Federation powerful but made us/they Parmamently Immortal gasp unable to die or be killed and beheaded became Beautfiul but sexy then with they then Snapped freely both vanished with they too late Appeard deads then More Volturi guserds thennuked then lost as all of color then with they good skin then they ae Lost from human families then in time became More toned like her Alice they appear to be healthy that's right saved but rescud then too late aboaered with three then too late Into a thing preparing then Blew up with they fused with three blew up then too late bodies vanished us/as all of them frozen it as too late folded space with both animals then wre wiyth Marrid but matd whpo ewre blood bonded each both cloistered from us/them Mated onto their Wives nuked then suddenly both vanished good guard they are dead then then frozen solid then in time more as all of Guards of the Volturi took over the Both became Intimate then covered were private then Strom herd them as all of them mating like Vulcans then As all of them created life then too late blown up it roared like from the 1986 movie Aliens it was 2020-2384 by now or more years followed families buried then it nuked freely final stage then broken freely it was too late the cause was natural cause old age organ failure then Too late women had kids had boo boo's toys two had kids then it came too late crunched from Here Gol made a planetary base in time never aged at all. |
therealKOTLC chapter 34 . 11/25/2019 Im so sorry about ur friend! :((( |
Debbie Hicks chapter 35 . 7/30/2019 35, Chapter 6. 36. Changed BEella's pv then fled bitten besty friends swallowed blod venom salien snakes the kild then with the both then then with aliens /Vulcans yiou tere who turned yiu tell us then growl;ing get her then wit tey scraming this one murders peoler Executd with the best friends scramig beaten by asaultsd HEAeads with theirs good gusard we find you charged with murder with both are a freak gert her/they the scramig tgen KKKilled by a Lematya pack too late ten Venom was in my system then then with they Screamig asaulted with tey were with both good more the with yiu Murdered fled from her good yoiu die Lycans Screaming fled she surrenders yes end her wit they HHead freed with theirs good bring the freaks then them We report there is a crime killed them the group of Lycans bitten them good these heads as as all of bodies she is dead forever good melt them then myself was dying again with they Found by them the scramig the then ATOMIZED! Violently good guard with tey Deceasdd with them then toolate brought them good guard they are deceased of the both with both mixd up transformed up the full moon finally vaporized from here then Meltrdfbitten from here it was gone Alice who did to you gasp hr eyes are Anime Falkor's red with theirs then chained then howling then good Heads pierced freely then with the corpses with theirs bring them then lost my life then struggling to have both sides with theirs Alice they are hybrids Nothingnss sliced freely then brought there good guard we sentenced them to death without memories at all anymore are changed regained superwolves status Verdict Death to them! then lost from here then was in fact different so they Alice they can't age then they are with Bright yellow/black mixed up eyes gasp so they cannot be killed are Immortal with Venom from here oh no gasp then too late then Snapped freely then while asleep delivered good end them then melted from here it was too late killed then Alice they were Murderd then myself paler as them Phased with them then could drink blood ten suddenly was undying had pointed ears upswept eyebrows then the hair remained long with bangs gasp they done terrifying things that was it was not human a Wrewolf again so the best friends and they Alice they had phased back in clothees as all of it from The NASA Bodysuits from both gone ten it was too late oh god my muscles are more tougher oh what a hunk me nah A-hem stop flirting with Stacey holy crap you are beautfiul me you are so paler you are right Hey Bells yes crap you are what a priestess spoken to the elders they noticed I Look from here we can't die are Immortal then Smashed from here then delivered hood they never returned made a boon and she is clad in this gasp she looks Vulcan then Melted that stopped from here but they are low followed from both but are guilty these as all of them are not mortal birthed made them non-living then lost it now had a headache did the most unspeakable thing cured Rose via my powers gasp then used my powers was gifted to heal then went into a trance was a Telepath by touch then freed of pain was not changing anymore caused her to look at me Bella you are not normal healed me name In the name of Surak it's Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar of Vulcan gasp Alice had a vision they know you are they caused us to be the same you are dressed like a Vulcan priestess it is a woman of authority ranks and titles a female priest is a Acolyte good god a Vulcan woman correction her hair is in a colif very long her eyes are darker Piercing cold golden/black it's Onyx one hand higher raised acted very logical but was with Surak Madam you dare give authority over me Sir! she with a cadre of Acolytes meet my kitten Shiloh you ok Allergic we brought pets had young stopped we are low oh my god she is trained from here. |
BellaAmorEterno chapter 35 . 12/16/2018 You have done an amazing job writing this story I would love to read more :) Life happens and that's okay everyone needs a break every now and then. :) |
YaleAceBella12 chapter 35 . 12/18/2017 Please write more. |
BabydollnherTeddybear2011 chapter 35 . 8/13/2016 Please upload more soon im loving this and cant wait for more xx |
vicky86 chapter 1 . 1/1/2016 Love it |
Lupinica friggasdoiter chapter 35 . 7/2/2015 Hi. Is that imprint offer still available? I'm a I nineeen year old caucusIan female with natrully brunette hair currently colored chestnut it's shoulder length and natural wavy. I have blue grey eyes and am extremely short sighted. So I wear square frame green and black glasses. I have a circlatory problem the lowers my core temp and makes me turn purple when cold. I'm currently 162.2 meters and 61 kg. I would like to be the imprint of Jacob, Jared or Seth. My real name is Alisha Hopson. |
Mrs.Thorn Winchester chapter 35 . 4/8/2015 love it |
Child of Dreams chapter 15 . 12/14/2014 Mmmm, chocolate brown with white patch on face and paws. |
Maria chapter 35 . 6/12/2014 The end of this chapter was so emotionally sweet and unbearably heart warming. Like I'm seriously in the verge of crying though I hope I don't cause I was crying when Bella's heart stopped in the first place. Anyways you have an incredible gift when it comes to writing it seen when you make readers (like me) feel emotional. BUT I want Victoria D.E.A.D. so please make it happen *sweet evil smile*. I'm not evil but I'm crazy which IS slightly worse. |
Jacobblacklover1 chapter 25 . 3/11/2014 For the club in Port Angeles why not name it dark wolf club Insted of melon I mean they are wolfes right hope this helps sencerly Jacobblacklover1 |
Child of Dreams chapter 7 . 1/24/2014 (frowns in thought) Judging from Sam's lack of reaction to Carlisle's scent, I'm assuming he hasn't phased just yet? |
crazyshine chapter 2 . 1/2/2014 I'm coming home, I'm coming home. Tell the world that I'm coming home... Leave it to me to dish out cheesey lines. |