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Definitely one of my top 10 stories on fanfiction in my book once I started reading I couldn't stop, please on dont stop writing

the story is good. i fail to understand why nel acts 100% human tho and that takes alot of fun reading it since its clearly unreasonable. Ichigo acts how he does because he has memories and a past, but all that nel doesnt. It feels forced, it feels like she only acts this way to have drama, which could have been achieved in other ways.

You made Urahara WAY WAY WAY too weak. He would have killed Aizen in his cocoon hogyoku state had it not been for his immortality, yet you have him getting one shotted and not even being able to avoid a kido like he's as weak and stupid as Komamura.

I started this fanfic yesterday, finished it today, and even though it started out very slow, I have grown to like it. Its sad to see so many great hollow-Ichigo stories abandoned, however seeing in that this was started 10 years ago! I don't expect this to be updated and no one else should either. Thanks u/Bruuz for the spectacular read!

Was expecting more out of your plans for Hinamori tbh. Sorta disappointed but whatever.

Hmm, Yoruichi is a lot stronger than Gin, if she used shunko she'd win easily unless Gin used his bankai and even then she'd use the thundercat form where she'd completely annihilate him. Urahara would most definitely use his bankai once he sees kurohitsugi form around him and his bankai along with thundercat Yoruichi is enough to beat the 3 of them, not to mention Tessai supporting them with bakudo.

Out of curiosity why did you change isshin's sword name frim engetsu to zangetsu? How does this change the story or develop it?

This chapter sucked ass

Hey this is by far the best series ive read in a while and ive become basically addicted and just wanted to ask if you are planning on continuing anytime soon and making ichinel official as on them dating