getting drunk and then kissing someone that's not your significant other seems like an incredibly shitty thing to do imo seems like something only cheating bastards would do

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linda historia

I'd have left her when she left for 3 weeks because of a fuckin modeling gig. Seriously? She's rich as shit, has loaded parents and she HAD to take it? I'd have said no out of principal.

As soon as I read that I knew it was coming. And I instantly hated her.

Alice should have left her. There's no fuckin excuse.

Last chapter completely ruined everything I liked about this story.

My theories why Alice is in the ER;

Attempted suicide?

Alcohol Overdose?

James attacked her?

A 'groupie' of Bellas' attacked her for ''only using Bella for her fame?

Eric or Mike...perhaps Laurent?

To tell the truth Bella kinda reminds me of Portia deRossi (DeGeneres now)...I've read her biography a few times (Unbearable Lightness) and the similarities are there...

so let me get this straight. if bellla kisses alice in front of an exx-girlfriend to show off we get 3 weeks of ridiculous drama. BUT if bella makes out with someone and basicaly has sex but ddoenst get quite there, we get a free pass to do it again with no problems cuz alice cant live without bella. and come on! bella should not be driking at all! she had fuckin alcohol and drug problems for years!

i honestly don't understand why the hell you made them break up for 3 weeks, transform alice in a 'alcoholic', 'drug addict' 'cutting' person, for, what it seems like, no reason at all. then she attempts suuicide, and they go back like it was nothing. she is a fucking model and now she has several scars . honestly, it felt like you wanted to put some kind of drama and coulldn'tt think of anything better. i haven't read everything yet, so i hope you wwrrote something more aboutt how this affects her life.

This may sound mean,but the only thing I want to see smoldering on Edward is maybe his eyebrows on fire..lol SOOO sick of him and Jacob (Characters) treating women like they are property to be owned..UGH !

Really enjoyed the story. My only wish is that it was able to keep the great momentum it started with throughout, but nonetheless, it was great.

Nice. love it already

Ahh I loved this story! Also loved the bible verse, it's my favorite one. Hee Hee anyways awesome job, awesome story and very well written! Loved it! P

I bet the boyfriend is going to be Jacob...

You can tell that this story is fiction by the fact that tow models are eating