That was awesome and cute, I loved it and excellent job

Thanks for the idea

Sorry, but i had to adlib a section

Ishi: just tell me who you like!

Ichi: no, it'll disturb you

all right... it's you

Ishi: you were right, that is disturbing

Awesome fic, very sweet :)

really cute and sweet thank u hon!

OMG YES I LOOOOOVED THIS.

I pretty much made an account just to review this story o really liked it, im not a fan of the descriptive sexual contact but i love reading when they finally come out and say it, which this did :'D

That was nice! I really liked your writing style. No actual sex though, but it was good.

aww it was cute!

How could you stop in the middle?

wow, i love the way you wrote this :)

Very good start! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

you stopped what the hell, don't stop at the best part it's not fair!

OMG WOW! This is your first Yaoi fic? Omg you're awesome! I love this pairing SO much and they were in character the whole way through! I love it! This is so cool! You should so do more of these! :D! Awesome -faves-

Bien, empecemos. Como fanática declarada del Ichi-Uryuu, tengo que decirte que, para salir del bloqueo y ser tu primer yaoi, éste oneshot es genial. Pones la suficiente cantidad de dulzura y deseo en cada paso. me encanta la declaración de Ichigo, puntualizada. Espero leer pronto más cosas tuyas y por supuesto, sabes hacer yaoi. Namasté.

Lets translate. As a freak-crazy-yaoi-fangirl, I have -MUST- to tell you taht, for break the block and for first yaoi, your work is KAWAI-GREAT-GENIAL! You uses the perfect mix of sweeteness, angst,craving and wish, in every step. I LOVE Ichigo's punctualized declaration. I hope read soon as posible more yaoi from you. Namasté

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