I love this, I just have one question... what about Bumblebee? What happened with him? Was he ever rescued?

Megatron desperation not a good thing
Truer words have never been said, Bee.

Lol. In Britain, we say 'slag' instead of 'slut'... Reading fanfics is pretty awkward sometimes. :/

Sequel

And now I'm wanting a sequel. Oh PLEASE? This is so adorable with just the right amount of angst. Hum... I'm gonna add it to my 'Bumblebee' list; it has serious potential for millions of little one-shots. :) I have a "story" that's entitled "Bumblebee" and I place anything from my mind, or mini-fics based off of other people's.

Do I have your permission to dabble with this, and maybe post a chapter? I always give credit/link to the story's page. :)

Ooh, sequeeeeeeeeeeel. :P

-Kangarooney-

I just realized your story was published first... *awkwardly scratches head* So um, yeah sorry. Oh and by the way, this HAS taken a different turn compared to Killjou's (Or her's took a different turn...?); added to that, I believe yours was also finished first. Let me check... yep, by two years in fact.

ANYWAY. I'm enjoying this, and hope it continues to stay amazing as I read further in. :)

Right away this reminds me of Killjou's "Yellow Sun, Grey Sky". So I'm guessing you read that, and later forgot about it, only to think it was your idea. I tend to do that a lot; but in my house with my brother, he'll tell us an interesting fact one moment, and then the next I'll repeat it, thinking I'd heard it from somewhere else. :)

Here's the end-link to Killjou's story: /s/5437489/1/Yellow-Sun-Grey-Sky

Unfortunately, your story is almost TOO much like Killjou's, one might almost think you were copying.

Howsoever, I will read on to see if you take it a different route than she did, if so, I will reiterate what I said and take it back with the utmost apologies.

Til then,

-Kangarooney-

GIVE ME SEQUEL NAO.
SRSLY.

well, this sucks, I'm killing the cons, painfully!

D: WHAT A BOUT BEE! get back here! please!? don't leave it like this! I must know what happen to Bee! ;w;

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwws wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w

weird story but good

so blurr hade twins?

bumbelbee and prowl seem to be geting close even thought there far apaert, wine will bumbelbee pop? dase megatron whont a boy or a girl? will he be happy with a girl?

i hope he never finds out about prowls "calls" to bee.

bee would get heart if he did or worse.

I stared to lol at Oh nononononono sequel yes

Poor Bumbelbee