I think you messed up Marcia with Marsha there. And I think weevil evolution might be more appropriate than migration, but hey, it is your fic...

Must read on.

Hm, you keep saying that Jack is prodding at Ianto's shields. I wonder if this is going to turn into an mpreg story. I got nothing against them :D

Cheers:)

A domesticity scene, how sweet of a start off. Maybe it isn't domestic, just sweet as can be. I probably should get up and start my day, but eh, what is another chapter or twenty before I get up.

Keep going or make a sequel plz this is awesome not many writers can write over 70 page of a story and still have my full attention n excitmen on what is on the next page so plz continue

did chapter 9 disapper? your chapter titles jump from 8 to 10

Something scary just occurred to me while reading this. What's going to happen to Jack when Owen and Ianto die?

Please continue :]

I loved this story. Has read it all the way through now. Took about tree hours... but it was worth it.

I would love to see more fics about this world. You made me fall in love with Ianto/Owen and Jak/Owen. Before I wasn't that in to slashing with Owen, but now I want more. And this story about the tree of them is almost as perfect as it gets...

I really hope that you continue exploring the universe that you've created, and give us a lot of new stories. *puppy dog eyes*

This is the BEST STORY EVER! I've only just found it and am really really hoping that you are going to do more stories. Absolutely fantastic, got the characters nailed down so well, couldn't stop reading.

Oh no! This can't be over! It's such a good story!

Will there be another sequel?

aw, the end! Great story, I enjoyed reading it so much! But there had better be another sequel! This is just too cute to not continue. Thank you so much for sharing with us!

to tell the truth I really hate to see this end...!

and it was one H*E*L*L of a ride...!

**snickers** torchwood (normal) *giggles* laughs*

chants sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel

waves her arms at the others to join in the chant sequel sequel sequel

aw, very cute chapter! keep up the great job!

Great set of chapters! Glad everything has gotten better...well as good ad having a wearwolf in your head can be. Still, great job can't wait for more!

definitely NEEDS therapy...but we have all known that,now haven't we..?

but it's all good ..the knob is back where it belongs,and his(evil),(nasty).(anger far better word)? side is caged...?

yep was worth waiting for

waiting for next chapters (if any) Please