Omg omg omg! So many hartness feels I can't even! Best end to a chapter ever (chap 4) in all my years as a fanfictioner I have never read anything that amazing! You are such a talented writer this is fantastic! I've been carrying this recon on me ever since you left me! :'(

Omg omg omg! So many hartness feels I can't even! Best end to a chapter ever (chap 4) in all my years as a fanfictioner I have never read anything that amazing! You are such a talented writer this is fantastic! I've been carrying this recon ever since you left me! :'(

This is completely heartbreaking, and as I've always been a little bit of an emotional masochist, I adore you for it. It's so raw and feeling and I just want to smother Jack and John in one massive hug and weep with them.

Much love on another great fic.

(Although, did you know that you're last two chapters are all the same thing smunched together? Might want to fix that, as it was a little bit confusing at first. Especially since I was wondering where the last chapter went until I realized that it was the whole fic, just edited.)

Well, I'm new to the Torchwood fandom, but I really like this story! Did you notice that the last two chapters were all the previous chapters smushed together, though? That was kinda annoying. Love John! (But everyone's so angsty! It's a bit funny, really)

-TSM

First fic I've actually been able to bring myself to read since. . .it happened.

And it's heartbreaking. But I love this, and would like to read more.

wow. very good. I concur I was very raw after I saw them as well...and I saw all 5 in a row too. Very hard to deal with. Interesting idea that Jack would turn to John to take care of him. great job!

I wasn't sure who it was for a second. I thought it might be the Doctor, but then something didn't add up and I figured out it was John.

It seems fitting in someway that John should be the one to go to Jack after Ianto died. I really liked how ou wrote this story. Great job!

Oh gosh! I absolutely love and adore this piece. After watching the last episode I had a really weird dream circulating around Jack on that cruiser seeking comfort in John and then I stumbled across this and just had to read. It didn't disappoint. Amazing work!

OMG, that was so heartbreaking, but really goodx