Arda is our world in the distant past, but that's a connection that J.R.R. never made. And he wasn't called Gandalf then.

Aw, awesome!

Well-written and a good story

Why does this have no reviews? I like it. It's really interesting to see how the Middle-Earth mythology ties into other mythology.

There's a few minor spelling and grammar errors, and you need a bit more description, but not bad otherwise.

I'll see if I can keep an eye on your work.