This was a wonderful story. Thank you!

Wow

Great story.

Wow,I never liked Jacob, but this Jacob is awesome!

I always felt bad when Bella just forgave Edward and took him back. But in your story it felt right-they both realised the flaws in themselves and their relationship and they learned from their mistakes. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!

I'm so glad she said yes without any of the usual procrastinating! I enjoyed the story, thank you for sharing.

Beautiful end to the chapter.

She's playing a dangerous game and being so cruel to Jacob.

Brilliant!

Edward so stupid for taking that whore back. Worst Bella ever

Worst story ever. This Bella a fucking WHORE

This version is so well conceived and written. I am surprised it doesn't have more reviews. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed reading it and see these two come their senses in a healthy way.

THIS IS SO GOOD. WHY DOESNT IT HAVE MORE REVIEWS?
(Ps i wish youd write some more!)

THIS is how it should have gone. THANK YOU, you brilliant writer.

This story... its poetry.

The original story has its beauty and its otherworldly charms. I wouldn't change it. However, in tales of the supernatural... the humanity inside is often lost or takes a lesser priority to the divine.

You took the supernatural tale, and breathed in the humanity. No matter what they are, the core of their being is human. You let us see that beyond all that is different and unique about them, they are still just people.

People that rant and rail and fight. A couple that has to learn to communicate and compromise and understand one another. Their supernatural circumstances are not the love story. It is the joining of two human souls. Fighting and clawing to make themselves join and to stay enjoined. To be together, flaws and all.

Your story was a pleasure to read.
And a lesson I will not soon forget.