Oh my god... HOW COULD YOU GANNONDORF?! I never thought something so short could be so loaded with emotions. That just proves how great a writer you truly are. This was a beautiful and painfully short story, but I think that's very fitting.

Wowzers... Erm, i not sure what to say. You killed them both! ah,I know the feeling to not write a happy ending though I usually shut it up with something.

Still, a job well done though maybe you could have expanded upon it a bit more?

i don't remember a time were a fic has made me cry this fast and hard. it was beautiful, and sad.

Hehe sad story, but there was a slight happy ending.

Loved it!

THATS SO SAD! T~T WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! SNIFFLE SNIFFLE! CRY! (translation: sad but beautiful)

Very Romeo and Juliet...no doubt what you were going for of course. :)

Oh Goddesses! So Romeo and Juliet! This was brilliant... sad, yes, of course it was, but it was beautiful. :)

I understand, sometimes to get over a mood, you have to write about it...

But man, I could really feel Zelda pain, so good job depicting it.

I really liked the ending line: The princess and her hero were finally together, and their work was done.

But I think this was my favorite: Link was gone. Her hero, her light, her love was gone. Her body wracked with sobs, her small shoulders shaking violently. Her heart felt like it had shattered into a million pieces. She would not recover from this. She would never be the same person again.

It felt very poetic to me, and I loved it!

Yay, I love happy (sic) endings! Great job writing, I wasn't expecting the Zelda suicide. It kinda reminded me of one of the those Asian martial arts movies, "Hero".

Oh my Lord. That was shorter than I expected, but that is not a bad thing. A good oneshot, I shall say. It was interesting and I loved the dialoge.

Wow...to formal.

That was great! I can't imagine myself being so giddy after reading this! Maybe it's becasue meanwhile I was listening to "Love Games." Hmm...

Anyways, I loved the trajedy and the romance mixed together. You'll make a very good fanfiction writer, and I'll look forward to any further Zelda stories from you!

Great job!

Signed,

-AnimeWhiteRose-

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normally i dont like tragedies... i know this sounds really weird but for some reason, i felt like crying so i decided to read one. it was very good - although sad. but they do end up together in the end so i guess it wasnt heart wrenching. ahaha. still very sad though if thats what you were aiming for. _ keep up the good work.

Aw even though it was so sad I loved it!

Lasciatemi morire!

I love how it turned out!

"Their work was done."

You summed it up nicely here. Good job on this. )