I thought cloud as a Chocobo would be stupid but I like this . I really do.

This story is sooo good. I wish I had I wish a had a revive materia.

This was a fun story to read. dead or no, thanks for sharing. :)

This is so cool, and very realistic

Whoa whoa whoa

A real Chocobo Cloud!

Awesome! Awesome!

Cheers!

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What happened? You just stopped here.

Completely off the wall idea but I like it,

Here's a new reader really hoping that you come back and finish this one.

Cloud, the Speaking Golden Chocobo. Truly, that alone would've made this an epic tale worth reading, the fact that it's actually being done rather tastefully - rather than handing the chocobo a sword and watching it battle Sephiroth to the death for some greens - makes it even better.

Gyyyaahhhh! Such a cute chapter!

I just wanted to say that I've absolutely fallen in love with this story. This is going on my favorites list, and I would love to read more if inspiration strikes. :-)

A really intriguing story! Please continue!

So I read the first chapters of your story, and my first thought is, "what the heck." Seriously? How did you come up with this? But I keep reading and it actually starts to make sense and turns out to be pretty good. So in the end all I can say is you are a creative genius with a strangely twisted mind. I like.

this is so good
its a very interesting read and im awaiting more chaps quite eagly (SP?)
this idea I cannot wait for Choco-Cloud to meet Aeris next:)
I can imagine a meeting with Cid XD
Cid:A bird? Cloud:this "biird" can kick your butt