Yes! I Wana know!. Please update
Please finish this work of art?

I really wonder what Demetra's bounty poster would look like. Would it just be the name and bounty with no picture because the navy CAN'T take a picture of her? And even if they did manage to take a picture of her when she's visible, no one would be able to recognize her anyway due to usually being INvisible, right? So I'm really wondering what her bounty poster would look like.

This was a good find, very creative take on the "falling into OP" idea. Your oc was original too, I love reading interesting original characters like this

I just tricked my friend into thinking that I wrote this.

This girl is really... weak. She isn't exactly a "dreamer" like the title says. I wish she'd be a dreamer in personality, and its very weird that she'd be in KIDD'S CREW of all places(dude's a total morganeer. Dreamers are peace mains right?)
Is her invisibility a devil fruit? Otherwise i feel like she's cheating the system.
I feel that there's a bit of OC x Killer or Kidd but i'm not sure...
Makes the story kind of cringey.
I wasn't exactly clear on what she did with her friends. Gangmembers? Eh?
Otherwise, it proved somewhat entertaining.

I REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY

Finally someone is using the dream theory, I always thought about the soul visiting other worlds

This is great, I didn't expect Demetra to have a friendly conversation with a admiral no less

Oh no

OOOH SHIT

muito obrigada eu adorei essa fic!

OMG THE SUSPENSE! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Still love it even though i hav read more than twice...pls dnt giv up and continue to write...

An interesting take on using an OC in the One Piece world. Certainly better than mine. Is there more?

Very interesting approach to the 'OC falls into another world' subgenre.