That was AESOME! Last time I saw 1 like this it had sexual scenes o.o

yay so good! they are my otp so thanx

This is so totally, heartmelting cute! I loved it and it sweetened my politics lesson alot. Thanks for that.

And continue that style of righting it really makes me laugh and feel with the charakters

how cute on the doll detail things they sounded so cool

it's good so far

Aside from a few spelling mistakes I think you did perfectly. This was an amazing story. ;)

that was so cute and fluffy

i liked it

The story was really cute! soul x maka is one if my favorite anime pairings.

Really good, great job.

Wahh, this was so cute! -Understatement- I can't come up with any other word.

I don't usually read short stories but this one pulled me in

And the story points with Kid and Black Star were so funny Cool calm and collected Soul in denial. Love it XD

SOULxMAKA FOREVA! *does Black Star cool pose* Keep writing, cool person!

aww this was so cute :) heheh i wish i had my 'future' lover's mini doll lol if they piss me off i could just stab the doll and hopefully get reaction from it xD lol like voodoo dolls! ;D but this was all so sweet and romantic hehe a god's kiss xDD rofl black*star really knows how to piss someone off especially a certain white haired boy...hehe that's right TOUSHIRO! XDDD lmao haha jk jk xD...

LOL that was so cute~ Wished it could've happened in the story though

CUTENESS~! *has an aneurism from the adorable sweetness*

I loved the part of Soul being dissapointed because he wasnt the only one to see Maka in the black dress. It was really cute!