it took me a while to review this because I was too busy trying the right words. In the end I still can't find them, but this is a really great, really raw fic. Love Gojyo's whole rambling-but-coherent thought process, love the repetition which ties it together, love the imagery...

Damn. I want a shot of tequila now.

I really enjoyed this.

*flails* I HATE YOU SO MUCH! WHY ARE YOU SO DAMN GOOD? *runs in circles, still flailing* THAT'S NOT EVEN FAIR!

~several moments later~

Ok. I think I'm done. I think I've calmed down. *murrs* Ok, no I haven't. I still hate you. This is so freakin' awesome. I don't even know where to start. Everything is just...rawr! NOT FAIR! I'm so jealous of your skills. WAH! TT It's so damn god...