Have you even reread your story just curious?

Hahaha have u watched a very potter musical? I think I saw a refernce 2 that

I'll be exPecting it(: and whoop whoop another chap! I looove it haha Serb my stupid thing sent it to early again sorry this is shorter than the others sort of busy lol just wanted to I LOVED the chapter hahaha(: ready for the next update :D

I'll be ex

O! I get it! Good luck and I like the chap alot!

This fic is really good! Can't wait for your next chapter

I just caught up on the story, awesome chapters!Oh, your a junior?Me too ] Looking forward to college soon?

Yes! Your back!

Hey guess what it's the same anonymous ! :) ha but I decidided to put up my nIckname from school hahah hey I'm glad ur mOm is doing better I hope everything works out so ur workin on a book eh? Thts awesome when u become famous I'll have to put ur name up and I'll have ta buy ur book :D haha btw awesome chap can wait for the nxt one and sorry bout my typos:) hah can't wait and sorry if this review shows up twice welp adios amigos

Hey guess what it's the same anonymous ! :) ha but I decidided to put up my nIckname from school hahah hey I'm glad ur mOm is doing better I hope everything works out so ur workin on a book eh? Thts awesome when u become famous I'll have to put ur name up and I'll have ta buy ur book :D haha btw awesome chap can wait for the nxt one and sorry bout my typos:) hah can't wait and sorry if this review shows up twice welp adios amigos

Hey guess what it's the same anonymous ! :) ha but I decidided to put up my nIckname from school hahah hey I'm glad ur mOm is doing better I hope everything works out so ur workin on a book eh? Thts awesome when u become famous I'll have to put ur name up and I'll have ta buy ur book :D haha btw awesome chap can wait f

It took me a few minutes to understand the grammar in the comment section directed to me but I think I get what you're asking for. Say Namine and Roxas are talking. The conversation can go like this.

"Hi Nami," said Roxas.

"Hi Roxas," said Namine.

This is quiet simple in and of itself. You could also continue under one condition. They talk back and forth with no interruptions and it's easy to understand who is talking. E.X

"Hi Nami," said Roxas.

"Hi Roxas," said Namine.

"Did you like the ring I picked out last night?"

"Of course. I can't say no to a sapphire!"

Of course, this would be monotone making for boring character interaction. You could do it like this.

"Hi Nami!" yelled a rather hyper Roxas.

"Hi Roxas," whispered the young blonde, being suddenly awakened in bed by her recently engaged boyfriend.

"Did you like the ring I got you yesterday?" he asked.

"Of course. I love sapphires," continued the tired blonde.

Adding these details brings a certain shine to the conversation, making for a more fun story!

Thanks for the cookie! Yeah i do enjoy flashbacks u think they're funny, but if it's not part of your ploy u

don't have to put one in for me

Loved it! Excited with whats going to happen with sora and kairi next! And it's two of us on one account reading the same Story! Sorry for the confusion!

lmfao XD if i ever saw riku in tights i would be laughin so hard dat i think i might die XDDDD man

oo its gettin tense now finally dey kiss again lol n noooo numinu (namine) dont cry if u cry i cry TT~TT