Reviews for When Dreaming Ends
KnowNonsense chapter 12 . 2/1/2016
You can write the most beautiful stories. I'm so sad, but entranced right now.
I've never seen it, but if Moulin Rouge is half as wonderful as the story you've written, I will now. I can't put into words how much I love this.
Thanks so much for posting. :)
machi-pan chapter 10 . 11/22/2013
you just killed me right here right now thank you
Kitkat3195 chapter 11 . 8/8/2013
Well, it has been such a long time, and I don't think that you will ever see this review but...I'm still going to write it. :)

So yeah, congrats, you made me cry. :'(

I read this story without having watched Moulin Rouge before, but this story made me want to go watch it.
This was an absolutely stunning piece of work. I love how you were able to elicit so many different emotions from your readers throughout the story. The ending was tragic, yet beautiful. The only thing that comforts me is that L passed on knowing that Raito loves him.

I also really like how you made it so that this entire story was actually written by L for Light. So it's like, in the real world (well, more like "real" in the fictional world...if you get what I mean. Haha), Even though L and Raito were unable to be together, L and LIGHT are still alive and happy. It makes the whole beautiful tragedy a little easier for me to handle.

At least L and Raito will be together in death... "Soon".
Rosebud1991 chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
it was great. though made me wonder what if it was light who died i mean would his last words explain the situation how would l react and would he write the story also what about light's sister?
Leprechon50 chapter 11 . 9/2/2012
This was amazing! It's practically my favorite fanfic ever. And it made me cry too :(
AliceHyuuga07 chapter 10 . 7/24/2012
That was so sad! I can't help but cry.
DaJapican chapter 11 . 11/24/2011
So heart breaking, L didn't not deserve such a fate. Never read a musical fanfict before. My overall thought was it was good drama, even the music seemed to go through my head. So strange how you went about doing it. The ending was so angst, it seems L and Light never do have that happy ending. At least they knew love to the end. When Light dies maybe he will join him. Who knows...
lalala chapter 11 . 10/30/2011
.BEAUTIFUL!(cries)
hello chapter 11 . 8/19/2010
i really love your stories and this one was no different! so sweet and i love how you ended it! from the first chapter i was hook and haha been reading this till 5 in the morning trying to finish it!so long but worth it! i should be sleeping right now...so tired...anyway looking forward to your other stories and what else you come up with for sure! thanks
TheWhisperOfWind chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Oops, I accidentally put this on my alert list.

Anyway this story is an insta-fave because its so freaking beautiful!
silverfox chapter 11 . 6/10/2010
OK, first...OMGOSH! That was, like, so totally epic! I absolutely adored this and will read it over and over when I am bored with other, less angsty, LightXL stories (is it possible to have a LightXL story w/ no angst?) ;-) Second, When i was reading the last few chapters, i had the movie playing as well, and when Toulouse sang at the very end, "The greatest thing You'll ever learn Is just to love, And be loved in return..." I had just begun reading that part in the story. All through this story, I've been trying to match up your words with the pace of the movie and have always come up short. Not this time! I'm so happy it just happened to fit together for the last few seconds! Yay me! _ I loved how you had Light in the MR get Tuberculosis as well. I thought is was biter sweet in a really good way. I also loved how you had L write the whole thing for "Raito-kun" at the end; that was a really nice twist. (thumbs up!) Keep writing spectacular things and I'll keep reading them. Have fun w/ your other stories, and remember... UPDATE SOON! n_n
Amara777 chapter 11 . 5/31/2010
This was...simply beautiful. I totally want to see Moulin Rouge now. And I wanna see what other LxLight AUs you've got in store. Thank you! :D
Brecheese chapter 11 . 5/31/2010
Oh My god! that was such a good story! Great ending. Can't see why it hasn't got more reviews.
TheEndofTag chapter 11 . 5/24/2010
wow!...this is just beautiful!...although i knew that L was going to die at the end, i am still overcome with grief...but their love story is just too magical and if only they were together in the end, then it would have been perfect...but it is true that not all love story is a happy ending...at least L and Light love each other for what they are worth...again just love the story!
Lady Kiome chapter 11 . 5/23/2010
and in the end, every fairytale has a happy ending.

thank you for the immense pleasure that this story brought to me.

i honestly was not expecting the story...to be a story, but it was a welcome twist for my heart.

thank you very much & i will be reading...well, not this story...but other ones...you know what i mean. (i hope)
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