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Asj Johnson chapter 3 . 1/4/2017 I'm sad it's left off halfway through. I'd like to read the rest of the rescue and possibly some future implications if you come back to this sometime. |
Asj Johnson chapter 1 . 1/4/2017 Oh, this is great. Love the last part of the chapter. The fic's a little like an idea I had a little while ago, but... also quite different. I might like this more. |
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 3 . 7/26/2014 You're right, he's showing a ton of maturity. It's about time. It will be interesting to see how having Obi-Wan along changes things. |
k chapter 3 . 6/28/2014 your really good at these. I wish you would continue them |
Artemis J. Potter chapter 2 . 3/16/2014 Okay, I know I already left a review for this, but I just love it so much. I love how you made Anakin go about things in a more mature manner, I love how understanding the members of the Council were, I LOVED how supportive Obi-Wan was being, I love the bond Obi-Wan and Anakin share here...I just love it all. “There was the core of Anakin’s personality, laid out for all to see—to those he loved, he gave himself completely.” Oh, this filled my heart with such warmth. That really is the core of Anakin’s personality, and that’s why I love his character so much :) I don't want to pressure you, but I'd love to see this story finished. I have ideas, too, if you need any. I know you may be on other projects and don't want to, but if you do feel free to PM me. I just love this idea so much—Whenever I get melancholy about Anakin's fall to the dark side, fanfics like these make me feel so much better :) |
Artemis J. Potter chapter 3 . 2/7/2014 Oh, the feels! Just stop, please. I'm gushing. Why couldn't this have happened in the movie? Things would have turned out so much better *sighs longingly* I'm glad fans like you write what-ifs where situations could have taken a turn, usually for better. Are you going to add on to this story? I really think you should. It'd be interesting to see how this AU carries out further. You just left me with a really warm and fuzzy feeling _ |
Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 3 . 4/29/2013 Very very good chapter. Please continue this story. |
Noradin chapter 3 . 3/29/2013 Type your review for this chapter here... |
the-writer1988 chapter 3 . 11/17/2012 This is a great story! I'm liking how you've taken this, and showing how Anakin has acted differently. Him talking to the Council convinced them to send Anakin himself! Looking forward to more! |
MuggleCreator chapter 3 . 6/15/2012 Ooh! Great stuff. Keep it up. |
JediGaladriel chapter 3 . 4/17/2012 This is so good! I like this version of Obi-wan (instead of him saying the "dreams pass in time" line). I can't wait to see what happens! Please update soon! |
SpaceHead3 chapter 3 . 3/24/2012 This is pretty good. Are you going to update? |
Macceh chapter 3 . 2/19/2012 This is really interesting so far and I very much look forward to seeing where you go with this! |
GirlFromNorth chapter 3 . 11/6/2011 Please update soon :) |
Scfilover chapter 3 . 11/6/2011 It's great to see Anakin and Obi-Wan working together to find Shmi. Anakin is being patient and Obi-Wan is being a great master. Thanks for the update :) |