Hahahahaha, I love Itachi. He's hilarious.

This was good up until the very end when it turned out the whole thing had been a setup between Jiraiya and Itachi. That was way, way too contrived and consequently spoiled the fic for me. So much fucking effort just to get two dudes to bang each other? (And not just two random dudes, but people who were Itachi and Jiaiya's /relatives/...)

On top of which, it's like Naruto and Sasuke were no longer Naruto and Sasuke but Jiraiya and Itachi's little puppets. They're too dumb to realize their own feelings, so here come Jiraiya and Itachi to save the day! Yuck.

So hot. thank you. THANK YOU. _

Ooooo! Love it love it love it! XD heheheheee... But really love Sasukes lil jealously and then his lil confession of wanting more then just a fling! Lol love it!

Fabricated or not! That was hawt! So in my little head Sasuke oh it happened! Hehehehehehehe it happened big time! Love it! XD

ouch! that would have hurt! hope your toe's fine.

a short but awesome story. loved it.

LMAO! dude, this was hilarious.

:D

OH MY GOSH (MEGA-NOSEBLEED)

haha, not so much like as love

This is a clever Idea!

I haven't read another story like it!

I really like it.

Good Job Jelp!

Haha, NICE! Excellent work, now, prodded by your marvelous story, I'm off to dream happy, yaoi filled dreams!

haha that was funny, I have to say. Interesting plot too. :P :)

omg that was delightful. I brust out laughing with the part with Itachi poor sasu-cakes!

O.o Itachi is a voyeour. Or however the hell you spell that word off the top of my sleep deprived mind. THis was funny. I love it. It's awesome. Cooking oil... I need to remember that.

Wow that part about it being Sai pissed him off lol!