Reviews for Pride and Competition: Revised
kyo4 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I really liked it! I like a dominant Remus lol :)
uzo's biggest fan chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
you think that they will sell tickets to the next game? lol how much and were do i buy?
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Ehe *attempts an devilish cackle* Read the original, loved it. Read this one, love it too. Nice additions btw. _
Petal Painter chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
OMG that was cute P

Severus was a bit OOC, but it didn't matter really, it's such a cute story xD

kudos, dude :)
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
That story was a very fun concept; I enjoyed it! You didn't have to publish it twice. You just go to the original fic, click "edit," and choose the chapter that you want to "replace content in."
Hanyou-Foxgirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
This is awesome! I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews, I was appalled when I saw it only had four! I love this story! My favorite line was: "You came here to molest me?" XD

priceless. Thanks for the great read!
Her Ghost Writer chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Hellou,

I loved your fic. They're such a cute couple. I love snupin, and you found a very good way to make these two together.

Sequell?
snapealina chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I loved the old version, but I didn't mind a revised one :D There's just not enough Snupin fluff in the world :D
nightbliss chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
hot! and very well written

luved it :)
Ayriannah chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
It is better than the other version. you said you'd update no longer...this is fun, but not a new chapter. it's a new edition of an old story. *impatient gryffindorness(even though I'm no gryffindor)*