Reviews for Until It Sleeps
Ione chapter 7 . 9/19/2016
So...I remember reading this ages ago, loving it, then completely losing track of it. Let me make up for lost time by saying your story is still as amazing as I remember, and I'm glad that for such a rarepair, your story happens to be top quality. Whether you ever decide to finish it or not, the start you've made is fantastic and I know I'll read it again and again with as much enjoyment as at first. Thank you for writing it, taking such care with characterization, expanding on the grief and pain the Romulans feel, not to mention giving Winona her fair share as well. Your story is interesting and engrossing, full of great moments and character touches. I hope one day you pick it up again, but thanks again regardless.
Anna10473 chapter 7 . 4/25/2016
I really, really love your story and hope that you will continue writing it!
Marie chapter 7 . 4/25/2016
I just read all seven chapters of your story and would love to read more! I know it's been a while since you've updated, but maybe you'll come back to this story and continue?
DuskPuffin chapter 6 . 5/27/2014
Hey, still on this? 'Cause it is good .
DuskPuffin chapter 7 . 3/30/2014
So emotionally taxing here.
DuskPuffin chapter 3 . 3/30/2014
When they could go home as conquerors, not minders. I belive you mean miners, and I also belive that belive isn't spelled like this...
Guest chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
Please update! This story is amazing! I'm dying to know wat happens next!
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
he problemly would win her over more with getting her other son sam and bringing him to her!
shippergirlky chapter 7 . 7/22/2013
Ah I like this story. Wish you would continue it:)
Rehaniah chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
Okay, I realise I’m several years too late for this story and that you (the author) may not ever read this review, but I just had to say that this fic was absolutely beautiful. Your characterisations, your descriptions, the tension you build-up, the atmosphere, the heart-breaking way you describe the minds of both Winona and Nero – all of it was just beyond breath-taking and every single word was like a finely crafted piece of art in its own right. I really cannot describe how much I think of what you’ve created here but it truly is, without doubt, a wonderful piece of writing. It goes without saying that I sincerely hope that one day it might get updated again, but even if it doesn’t, I just have to say thank you so much for producing and sharing such a stunning piece of storytelling. Thank you :)
Kristina chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
This story is just so wonderfully heartbreaking. I would very much appreciate another chapter, hopefully you'll find the time to write more, sooner or later. Pleeaase:-)
The Guardian Raven chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
Like quite a few others are wondering, when are you going to continue it? I've been waiting patiently for the past couple of years...though I do understand that RL is probably using your time. I hardly have the time to read these days.

It's wonderfully written, hardly any errors(if any). Though I noticed in some places there are no dividers. Like between the AN and change of POVs.

Please, please please! Update soon? 3
QueenMismatched chapter 7 . 3/19/2013
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY MY GOD YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD IT IS TO FIND GOOD NERO OR NERO/ANYONE FANFICTION.

WHY YOU NO UPDATE?
mckeown chapter 7 . 1/21/2013
This is really good, however I think you should look into the whole her going crazy part. I know a woman who has just lost a husband that she really loved deeply would feel an immense pit of sorrow but her baby would help ground her, keep her solely focused on his well being and continued survival. A mother's instincts would realize that she must do whatever it takes to ensure the well-being of her child but when that means bedding the enemy she definitely won't feel easy about it although she'll think she has little choice in accepting Nero. I'm not saying you haven't done a good job relating their strained relationship and her grieving, you have, but I don't know about the whole them saving each other from insanity thing. Are you planning on finishing this?
Alpha Centarus chapter 7 . 11/23/2012
i love this story! the whole revertion/redemption idea is really great.
A) Because i have always felt sorry for Nero in one way or another and
B) because it will not be a cliche full revertion with unicorns and rainbows. it will be hard, mentally challengings, and will require many mess-ups until Nero is mostly Oren again.

good luck and happy writings
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