Well now that was some trip to the washroom. Shame on her friends for leaving her to go alone-although I guess that decision actually saved their lives. It's a good place to end this story, but that doesn't stop greedy me from wanting more, lol. Thank you for sharing it. It's very rare for me to read straight through an author's inventory like this, but I've been enjoying your writing so much that I haven't had enough yet, so I'm now off to read FBR.

Oh my, this is deliciously different. It is so wicked that Edward closed the bathroom door back (I'd be scared to death. And then, bathed in the dark shadows, he greets her by name from right in front of her. Oh dear!

Your continuation of PftW sent me to your fic list to see what else I could read. This was great!

Since discovering your stories and this one-shot, I recommend them every chance I get!
Not that you haven't heard this before, but It bears repeating, " plz plz plz start writing again?"

Great story! Not a bad place to end it, but one more chapter would have been perfect.

This HAS to be continued!
You have to give us more!
PLEASE!
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

I wish you would continue this.

I thought Edward decided to "have her" and yet he didn't have her AND he didn't "have her" lol

Give us more! ... Please?

very nice
loved it

You can't leave it there. that is just mean. it was good but the ending was a tease. lol.

Oh, this is good, I love the twist you have put on twilight. There are not many fanfic stories where the cullens drink human blood but are also not completely evil, so well done for being original. I can not wait to read the other chapters.

I like it

Intriguing.

Nah, he is going to fall in love with her and he won't kill her that is my prediction. Good start,a cliffie indeed