i like :3

Actually, this was really good. At first, I didn't know who was talking, but then after like really reading and examinging the story, I got it. Great job _- NaruSasu FANS UNITE!

Omg! I read this sooo long ago and I ever favorited it or reviewed? What the! I loved this! Seriously loooove every freakin bit of this! NaruSasu forever!.. Seriously this just seems that it could be possible to happen! And that's why I love it! Your amazing! Its great! Yay!

I wish Sasuke put up more of a fight. But all is well. Not very OOC actually! Only a few grammar and spelling errors but it's quite a good read.

Really nice story; I enjoyed it even though I'm more of a SasuNaru-fan

When I read it, I wasn't looking for mistakes, so I didn't notice anything according to grammar. Besides from what's already mentioned, I also noticed some other wrong choices of words, e.g. you wrote "Off course" when it's its actually "Of course" and "to aroused to..." instead of "too aroused to..." among a few others in the same category. I also recall that you wrote "cook" instead of, what I assumed should have been, cock at some point.

Hope that helped. Again, great story :)

I couldn't see any grammer, but you did this, (or something like it), a few times, "That goes to you baka, neji said". You did that when I think it could be "That goes to you baka", Neji said. I didn't know if you knew you did that or not. Good story though! c

Great story hot lemon and I can't recall finding anymistakes then again I'm half asleep! ;)

Definately a top two favorite!

XD Sorry this is short, I'm tired...

This is awesome though, I'm a complete sucker for good NaruSasu!

WOW this is soo sexy.

Maybe Sasuke needed to add a thing or two more in his to do list now.

THanX

Hi there! I enjoyed your fic - the idea was unique (Geisha!Sasuke fics aren't that common XD) and well executed. The smex was hot and all thier actions were clear and understandable. For English being your second language, your writing skills are good!

Like you've said yourself - grammar and spelling were the only drawbacks. I mean, it wasn't that bad but it could be better, you know what I mean? Perhaps, a beta could help you fix some of the spelling and grammatical errors. But it is very hard to find a beta these days, let alone a good one. You can browse for betas here on itself. Good luck!

Um...overall, the story was quite nice ). Not too many grammatical errors.

Sometimes you messed up with the : Their, There and They're, but not too many times. I guess you already know it but here goes :)

Their : Something that THEY OWN.

There: A place

They're: THEY ARE

If its something you want to work on, then I would suggest the dialogs. In english you normally use these: ("blah", when somebody is talking, instead of these: - blah.

Oh, and its not enough just writing what they say. Maybe you could explain HOW they say it, or maybe write what they're DOING, as they say it. Like, instead of "What?",Naruto said. You could write: "What", Naruto said , as his hand went up to scratch his head.

I don't know, just try to explain as much in the dialogs as you do with everything else.

Um...yeah, that was it:)

What I wrote is meant to help you, ok? Im not trying to bring you down or anything...

Well...Bye!