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ARestlessDream chapter 5 . 8/9/2011 Interesting story, I like it, but there's two things that are bothering me. First, it's 'maybe' not 'maby', and second, it's "You're" not your (for when you used "your all I've ever wanted...") Remember the difference when you're using you and are and when you're using your (as in it's yours). |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/12/2011 Omfg ! That's ahmazing |
StarRice chapter 1 . 2/6/2011 Before reading: YES ANOTHER ZEXION FICTION! even if it IS cutting...hopefully he's still smart After Reading: Well that was interesting. No grammar mistakes, the characters didn't seem OOC(thats out-of-character right?), and its a change having Demyx know about the beatings/cuts. Usually he's oblivious, but..yeah it seems to work. So are they dating or no? Sort of confused me there, but other than that I can't wait to keep reading! |
youngnozomi chapter 5 . 8/6/2010 Yays! Cuddle time! So cute. It started sad then turn awwww... They are so cute. Hope to see you soon. Bye-bye. Later. |
lemonlimediddies chapter 5 . 8/3/2010 total sadness! D: yesh! but its cute too! update soon~ |
Willow-tree48 chapter 5 . 7/26/2010 Hi! I really love this story. I'm not sure I've ever reviewed before, but whatever. :p Just thought I'd let ya know I was still reading. Willow P.S. - It's "maybe." Not "maby." I'm not trying to be critical, I just thought you should know since you use it all the time. :) |
this IS my happy face chapter 5 . 7/19/2010 I squealed when I saw you updated, and again when Zexy kissed Demyx!Can't wait until next update, fabulous work! |
this IS my happy face chapter 4 . 7/12/2010 I want to see a chapter 5... you can't just leave off there! please update! :) |
youngnozomi chapter 4 . 3/22/2010 Hooray! Saix got his ass handed to him. I happy now... Ohh fluff. oxO No! Zexy doesn't want to hurt Demyx but he doesn't realize that by pushing Demyx away he hurt him. Good job with ch 3 and 4. Hope to see chapter 5 in the future. Good luck and later. |
kira1525 chapter 4 . 3/22/2010 Can't Wait For The NExt Chapter(s) To Come Out! Great Job! |
sasunaru gaalee chapter 4 . 2/26/2010 *Shoots Saix puppy* :0 Stupid Saix Hurting both Zexy and dem dems like that!...Great story so far though! (This is random, but the last update you made as a day after my birthday :3) |
AllSheNeedsIsLove chapter 4 . 1/31/2010 WTF, AW. |
withallhearts - - x chapter 4 . 1/31/2010 Aw! Zexy broke Demy's heart~ :[ I hope they get togeather soon... Or have someone get beat up. Again. |
agent-to-the-rescue chapter 3 . 1/17/2010 Awesome story Can't wait until the next chapter! |
Alas Beautiful Mind chapter 3 . 1/9/2010 i love this story. thanks for updating |